Comments by Solace
- "I do so want more prose, and prose like this will do - more than that and any other, it is it's lack I rue.
Indeed, here I find so far you're most admirable piece, it has all the elements of good poetry"
Posted by Solace on "Who wants a bit of prose?" by gigantopithecusragno
- "Particularly brilliant, the first two stanzas, "he doesn't mean to, boy" perhaps would suit the pause more. Not sure the sentiment finale agrees with me, but this is still an impressive piece of literature"
Posted by Solace on "Pain was his best Joy..." by gigantopithecusragno
- "A tinge of conservatism behind conservative words, take care that expression is not stifled behind the litany of these lyrics, the sentiments are valid, but do they breathe life onto the page or sit idle?"
Posted by Solace on "Mobius???" by gigantopithecusragno
- "This is fantastic, your vocabulary and mannerism is something to hold dear in a world of jargon ridden gibberish. Mimesis, is the crux of good artists, indignant petty economy is the death of the rest. Welcome :)"
Posted by Solace on "Plagarism???" by gigantopithecusragno
- "You feel, and in doing so represent something so pertinent that I dared expose myself so voluminously, so statistically erroneously, I daresay in my old age - if technology does not fail me, i'll still be reading your words"
Posted by Solace on "A Silent Heartbreak" by Spiritus_Frumenti
- "Because you are human and willing to admit it, willing to show it, and they're unwilling to show anything but an ability to dance and evade any and all meaning. Unwilling to show anything but the impenetrably words of a piece of machinery..."
Posted by Solace on "A Silent Heartbreak" by Spiritus_Frumenti
- "I don't care a jot what those murderers say, those hope killing caustic eyed so called critics, I find here in your words something more worthwhile than the thousands of pages of publications across the world"
Posted by Solace on "A Silent Heartbreak" by Spiritus_Frumenti
- "love is so lonely, because we make it a symbol, we live to achieve externalities in order to grab at happiness, lock up our piece of the pie. Senseless expansionism. Theres something to the sentimental notion, that its within us already"
Posted by Solace on "A Silent Heartbreak" by Spiritus_Frumenti
- "but I know this intimately, ineffably. Yet that isn't even the point, we realize need, yearning, and then give up - and all we have is the longing for what? who knows? the silence, is a symptom of our loss and confusion"
Posted by Solace on "A Silent Heartbreak" by Spiritus_Frumenti
- "Makes me think of the harmony of the spheres, what music is supposed to be, harmony - this is a delicate harmony of its own, unity expressed elegantly - music should suffuse us and uplift us - and we do need that, we need it immensely"
Posted by Solace on "-Tongues Twisted in Melody-" by Revisable Retina
- "I mean those two words in conjunction say the whole world of the modern education system to me...right there...and yet they're so awesome to play with, thats how they get ya...tricksy pretty looks, evil purpose..."
Posted by Solace on ".box girl." by sIo
- "For some reason this says midlife crisis to me - you know the part where monotony breeds a rattling of the cages, but its too late - so its a half hearted attempt - and i loved the childhood beginning pipe cleaners...just pipe cleaners..."
Posted by Solace on ".box girl." by sIo
- "Its a homage and a truth amongst lies - you get what you asked for - so is it worth paying or not? you might just have to taste it to be sure..."
Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
- "We each have our masks, and those memoir's of childlike abandon stay with you forever, nostalgia syndrome and desire become symbolic of another greater desire - the conclusion - oh the conclusion"
Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
- "But I wish we'd all be able to sit around and hear Homer sung as it was sung, and Grimm coming to life with nothing but words - lies, but so beautiful as to be better than any truth"
Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
- "But they're useful in the compulsion - building beautiful nothings - despite the fact that every boy is a boyscout: really?
Campfires are still an important feature of even modern culture, we just don't tell as interesting tales"
Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
- "ha! Feels like you and the captain have been dancing too often together, and its all bribery, every moment is more of it - the actuality of changed positions, of the nature of enslavement - the lies are all that is true"
Posted by Solace on "Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey
- "Those moments in life that are so beautiful are sad in themselves - beauty that brings one to tears, ave maria sung in hushed tones - to seperate is to remove them...for the nature of both is to accompany the other"
Posted by Solace on "Un Amor Desperado Y Una Alma Perdida" by Spiritus_Frumenti
- "You can see this in art of any kind - what is beautiful is surrendering to sadness, to love - to anything - like falling from the top of a building, it encompasses so much sadness and love and beauty that it transforms"
Posted by Solace on "Un Amor Desperado Y Una Alma Perdida" by Spiritus_Frumenti
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