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Pain was his best Joy...
By gigantopithecusragno
Know yourself a monster?,
IF monsters all you see?,
If home the heart of soul,
A monster you shall be,
Never know if hug or strike,
Lightning just as quick,
Monster wore a human face,
Excuses always slick,
"You know how hard he works",
"He doesn't mean to boy",
I knew well his smile,
That Pain was his best Joy,
Hell is just a tunnel,
Heaven point-of-light,
IF you have survived,
You have won your fight...
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© 2007 gigantopithecusragno
Comments on "Pain was his best Joy..."
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On Wednesday, December 26, 2007, italianbella
(185)
wrote:
great write:)
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On Thursday, August 16, 2007, gigantopithecusragno
(21) wrote:
The words are not 100% accurate... Convincing yourself that you have value and worth as a punching-bag for the breadwinner, because-as livestock-your needs are provided for...I tend to wax sarcastic...Thanks, Jon...
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On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
swift and intelligent............your words have a quick and decisive echo..........well done
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On Wednesday, August 15, 2007, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Particularly brilliant, the first two stanzas, "he doesn't mean to, boy" perhaps would suit the pause more. Not sure the sentiment finale agrees with me, but this is still an impressive piece of literature
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On Tuesday, August 14, 2007, gigantopithecusragno
(21) wrote:
Thanks Halo...
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On Thursday, August 9, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Giants at the circus party
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On Saturday, August 4, 2007, gigantopithecusragno
(21) wrote:
The past you cannot change, Knots help you cling to rope, No matter WHAT they do, Own your futures' hope... ~Thanks sIo
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On Thursday, August 2, 2007, sIo
(926) wrote:
i can't put my hand on...a finger doesn't give justice to the awesomitity of this...but this is well done, ol' chap. well done.
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On Monday, July 30, 2007, gigantopithecusragno
(21) wrote:
Thanks, I'd like to...spidermonkey...
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On Sunday, July 29, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Sounds to me like you should post more. Wellcome to DP
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On Sunday, July 29, 2007, gigantopithecusragno
(21) wrote:
Thanks very much Drea and Mab, No one can control their start, but we can all shape our future...your friend, spidermonkey...
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A former member wrote:
this flowed so smoothly.very dark,and I loved the title :)
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On Saturday, July 28, 2007, Drea
(1443) wrote:
interesting indeed. Welcome.
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On Friday, July 27, 2007, gigantopithecusragno
(21) wrote:
Thank You Symph, it is an honor to be of service GR aka spidermonkey...
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On Thursday, July 26, 2007, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
nicely done friend, i can see glimpses of truth and hope and damnation all rolled into one, i enjoyed it...welcome to DP :) -symph-
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On Thursday, July 26, 2007, gigantopithecusragno
(21) wrote:
Thanks Mylissa and Alanarchy...glad you liked it...GR[ie.spidermonkey]
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On Wednesday, July 25, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
very interesting...welcome.
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On Wednesday, July 25, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
If we ever make it out alive. Interesting write.
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