Comments by spaniellie
- "sasch, this is really heartbreaking. ptown in starting to ware on you. i loved this poem, the way it ended was brilliant. your word choice was great. honest, witty, beautiful."
Posted by spaniellie on "A Walk" by Saschwann
- "touching. word choice was awome, the last four lines really stood out. but i have to ask if this is symbolisim?"
Posted by spaniellie on "This Day" by Saschwann
- "this is tricky word usage but i have an inkling of what your big heart is crying... great write, i loved the flow of the 1st 2 stanzas and the way the 3rd left me hanging."
Posted by spaniellie on "Spring Break" by Saschwann
- "awww the school nights in a little mountain town. i wish i was there... "i got five on it!" after living in the moment after so long you forget there is a future and past ey?"
Posted by spaniellie on "Rum" by Saschwann
- "i love this. it was a whole other side of you. completely breath taking really. you are amazing."
Posted by spaniellie on "No Borders" by Saschwann
- "this is heart breaking. you have broken my heart...sew it up again please? :) this is a beautiful write. you have matured alot in your writting. you are more blunt and strait forth with your true feelings and im loving it"
Posted by spaniellie on "Creativity?" by Saschwann
- "one of my faves i think. it explained yourself perfectly. iam in awe!!! please remember that it is HEATHLY to talk about things, and that despite you writing only for an outlet your beautiful writting should not gather dust..."
Posted by spaniellie on "A Letter to Me" by Saschwann
- "awww man, you never cease to amaze me my friend. these poems are about to explode from the sorrow that is put in them. you deliver your emotions so well when your trying to hide them. :P i love you."
Posted by spaniellie on "A Couple More Poems" by Saschwann
- "oh honey! im here for you. you should know that your darkness contains more beauty then christs light. "
Posted by spaniellie on "Me (I guess)" by Saschwann
- "very nice. this is pretty fucking funny. i laughed out loud, and the fellow students looked at me more akwardly then i did to the poem!"
Posted by spaniellie on "My Fetish" by Saschwann
- "god i love this poem! it is so fucking dark. hahahaha die mothers die. how funny it is that our mothers die and decompose in another... mother."
Posted by spaniellie on "Mommy Dearest," by Saschwann
- "this poem makes me cry. fucking assholes!!! you deserve so much sasch, dont let it bring you down. this write is so beautiful and honest. you are so talented! :)"
Posted by spaniellie on "Break Me" by Saschwann
