Comments by purr_verse
- "the concluding stanza is marvellous - simple, powerful, challenging and...well, all the good stuff. >:) Always a great thing to see a post from you!"
Posted by purr_verse on "A Storm Just for Me" by lordshadow
- "the penultimate stanza is damn outstanding; could be used as an instructional device for how to create effective rhyme, metre, cadence & format without sacrificing meaning. excellent!"
Posted by purr_verse on "Infection" by lordshadow
- "very clever, and excellently constructed, write. great use of metaphor/simile; love the conclusion too... Great work!"
Posted by purr_verse on "If" by lordshadow
- "powerful brutaltruth; the last four lines are exceptionally good. your metre and structure never fails to impress; excellent write."
Posted by purr_verse on "Kill or Be Killed" by lordshadow
- "and another example from you of excellent metre and a real natural feel for cadence. :) the second-last stanza is my favourite here; strong message in this one too. fine write!"
Posted by purr_verse on "Hate" by lordshadow
- "excellent metre!! hooray! :) welcome to dp - this was a smooth and impressive read...my favourite part is the first half of the second stanza. fine write!"
Posted by purr_verse on "Nothing More" by lordshadow
