The Allegedly Abused

By lordshadow

resenting your presence
presenting the essence
of senseless discussion
disgusting percussion

your lips sound like tips
of fingers belonging to hands
that are harmless and armless and
beating this hollow-soul drum
like a homeless old bum
as he sleeps on the street
as he begs at your feet

he cries for a dime or a
slice of your time to fulfill
all the cravings that these
pencil shavings will never
remember dismembered from
something once used to paint
beauty with combinations of letters

now gainfully used by
abused pity pushers
so painfully raised
to be hatefully hazed
and to hopefully find a
reprieve from depression
but nothing will ever get better

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Copyright 2004 lordshadow
Published on Wednesday, September 15, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: You have a way with flows and concepts and ahh. I love it.

  • elisa On Saturday, September 25, 2004, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    this is absolutely amazing...you certainly gave life to these words:) elisa

  • purr_verse On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    the rhymemastery of this is just amazing. rollercoaster of syllabic imagery; read at hyperspeed, crashing... great write.

  • Dayer On Thursday, September 16, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    That pretty much sums up my thoughts on this as well

  • stuart_pid On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, stuart_pid (135)By person wrote:

    the bombardment of rhymes caused my mind to do somersaults and the words fluidly roll off the tounge. i love the way you constantly change rhythm in this peice. excelent work my friend.

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