A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)
By lordshadow
synthetic theoretical hypothetical bullshit
hypodermically injected directly
into your head
uttering guttural moans
as the rusty syringe
passes through flesh and bone
straight to your brain...
from behind your ear...
so you won't feel the pain...
there's nothing to fear...
held by the hand of someone
who demands your respect
but neglects to inject
that little piece of information
strapped down
to the table
but still not so stable
stripped of everything but
the clothes on your back
bright lights make the
white walls brighter
blinding and binding
with your eyelids taped to your forehead
before you t.v. screens
flash scenes of violence
obscene phrases replace the silence
their manufactured do(s) and don't(s)
assimilate your predetermined shouldn't(s) and won't(s)
on the surface the same person
but beneath the layers of regularity
resides a "brand new" you...
...and then they inject you
back into your could-have-been life
straight to your brain...
from behind your ear...
so you won't feel the pain...
so you won't feel the fear...
Comments on "A Brand New You (bondage and brainwash)"
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On Friday, September 26, 2008, bloody LOVEly
(85) wrote:
isnt that the absolute worst endless cycle? nice work, it's got a great beat.
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On Monday, March 13, 2006, AHHH
(184) wrote:
absolutely amazing. well done. well done.
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A former member wrote:
"...and then they inject you back into your could-have-been life" Yep, still amazing. *love*
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, Sin
(1135) wrote:
~their manufactured do(s) and don't(s) assimilate your predetermined shouldn't(s) and won't(s)~ wow this floored me, you are amazing ~kristy
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On Monday, October 4, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
Woohoo this kicked ass. Glad to see you writing again!
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A former member wrote:
ahhhhh a little bit of the ultraviolence perhaps.....nicely done
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
somehow this all rang with familiarity to me - imagine that :) - awsome write and glad to read you again!!!
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
excellent! damn fine to see you back, and this is a fantastic write - the rhythmshifts are great and really well done; love the ominous feeling of the ending too. great stuff. :)
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, FallenFaith
(44) wrote:
and i thought i was abducted by aliens. no really this is really nice work, raw and uncut, readable at the same time
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
WOW... This is great. It is so clear what is going on but so hidden as well. It holds a great concept and I really can relate to this thought of society but maybe not quite so delicately.
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Soulseeker
(108) wrote:
Also... the title caught my attention and I am so glad you didn't let me down with this. Some people get great titles and there work just ruins it all, but obviously not in your case. Amazing insight! Bethany
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
the title is awesome... and you are so right!
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was simply profound..i am so glad you're back!:)
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
glad to be back. but you're too nice. thanks for the words.
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
Bhairav*
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
::eyes widen:: i'm with Bhairave here, damn...
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A former member wrote:
wowwwwww...in-friggin-credible write....glad i found your warks..and will be reading more
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On Saturday, October 2, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
...and I will be reading yours as well. thank you.