Hate

By lordshadow

take this piece of paper pale
and write down all your sorry tales
so we can feel the same as you

and see it through your eyes
so that we can all despise...

...all the things you hate so much
and all the love you fear to touch
and show us your emotions true

so we can know "real pain"
and hope to feel the rain...

...of every salty drop you cry
help us not to wonder why
you sob each night, yet shed so few

and collect them in a cup
so that they won't dry up...

...but still they will evaporate
like all the things you love to Hate
replaced with others; shiny, new

and when these words are lost
you'll realize Hate's true cost

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Copyright 2004 lordshadow
Published on Friday, September 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Vexed On Monday, January 30, 2006, Vexed (74)By person wrote:

    sounds like someone who would actually care to hear how other people are feeling, unless it is finding out what makes them tick...

  • A former member wrote: Nice, I like this alot .

  • Ideas On Saturday, October 23, 2004, Ideas (50)By person wrote:

    Whoa... I read this twice, and still, words fail me... I love it

  • A former member wrote: This was.. wow. I love your angle on things. You have such a great grasp on observing and then putting things to words. You write differently than most. I adore it.

  • Dayer On Monday, September 6, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    I think this is my favorite poem by you so far :)

  • purr_verse On Friday, September 3, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    and another example from you of excellent metre and a real natural feel for cadence. :) the second-last stanza is my favourite here; strong message in this one too. fine write!

  • Sleepwalker On Friday, September 3, 2004, Sleepwalker (15)By person wrote:

    I love the last two lines...so true

  • A former member wrote: lovin it man im lovin it yet again you over shadow me great write ~Ends

  • A former member wrote: If I am understanding this correctly someone has been reading to much poetry on this website. but I must agree with you I'm pretty shure allmost everyone on this site is an intellectual sadomasochist

  • A former member wrote: and there is nothing wrong with that really

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