Comments by TornPieces
- "Thank you, forgive me for it being so intense, i wrote it while I was having a flashback kinda. Sometimes I have to write about this over and over again, so I can get it out of me. Thank you for being my audience , your ears take the silence away "
Posted by TornPieces on "I think my Daddy broke me.." by TornPieces
- "Thank you so much for this comment.
I appreciate that it brought a message to you. It was very cathartic to write it "
Posted by TornPieces on "Shell of Lies" by TornPieces
- "Green is the color of money, and deception..and peopole turning blind eyes for money...gain..power... etc.
thanks for the comment. "
Posted by TornPieces on "Black" by TornPieces
- "The adoring fans are all the hands that touch her...they are many.
The races are every day, winning a race for normalcy....always being perfect. Nobody ever noticing.
You hit it right where it meant. Thank you for correcting me on that too.
Thanks for commenting guys :) All comments are so helpful and encouraging to me
~Torn"
Posted by TornPieces on "I'm a Cute Girl " by TornPieces
- "Its very much from my stream of consciousness, what I write sometimes.
I'm glad that the thought will stick with you, I t impacts me the same, as if I didn't write it lol"
Posted by TornPieces on "I'm a Cute Girl " by TornPieces
- "Lol I know for a fact im not normal! Trust me ...sometimes poetry is the only thing that keeps me functional.
Thanks for the comment :)"
Posted by TornPieces on " Mind Fuck." by TornPieces
- "iced world..that they live in because they are murdered.
black trees are the ones that hurt them, frozen as trees too..
They are agreeing, and remembering something they both went through...thats why there is a silence :)
I appreciate your comment, and that you took the time to read it.. and notice things :)
"
Posted by TornPieces on "Frozen Innocence." by TornPieces
- "Thank you so very much for your comments on my work :), they help me feel better, despite the subject matter of the poems"
Posted by TornPieces on "Fantasy" by TornPieces
- "Thank you so very much for this wonderful comment, im glad you enjoyed it as much as i enjoyed writing it :)"
Posted by TornPieces on "Dark." by TornPieces
