Dark.

By TornPieces

 I learned how to tie my shoe....

dark.
 I hoped you would come home mommy...I was scared
  dark.
 Mothers hand turned into fist
  dark

the floor is cold.
 I hold my elbows,  It feels like a hug
  dark.
 You wake up happy and make breakfast....today will be a good day.
  light.
 You lovingly caress my cheek.....then.I drop my bowl.
  dark.
 My cheek is red.
  dark.
 school....."Shes unanttentive, and does not focus in class" dark. dark. dark.

 my hand caresses my arm....
 red.red.red.
       dark.


 ~O.R 

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Copyright 2012 TornPieces
Published on Sunday, May 20, 2012.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This really, really shook me, hit me closer to heart than I would like to admit. A very sorrowful read.

  • A former member wrote: Loved this dark...sorry u have 2 go throúgh it.

  • A former member wrote: Ones who are hurt the most in life, tend to be the strongest ;). Youll do great things.

  • Melancholic VIncent On Thursday, June 21, 2012, Melancholic VIncent (428)By person wrote:

    Seems a delicate piece, to express bad things that happened. It seems you feel scared. Good piece :)

  • A former member wrote: Love this post! Dark, dark, light, dark..awesome usage of light and dark to express emotions! Welcome to dp!

  • Devilish On Wednesday, June 6, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Oh wow .. I promise I love this more than anything. Dark.. I hold my own.. dark i love myself dark.. i love you dark.. hello there welcome to my world .. if you eva need anything i'm a click away.. dont be scared' Scholar

  • TornPieces On Sunday, June 17, 2012, TornPieces (27)By person wrote:

    Thank you so very much for this wonderful comment, im glad you enjoyed it as much as i enjoyed writing it :)

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