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Dark.
By TornPieces
I learned how to tie my shoe....
dark.
I hoped you
would come home mommy...I was scared
dark.
Mothers hand turned
into fist
dark
the floor is cold.
I hold my elbows,
It feels like a hug
dark.
You wake up happy and make breakfast....today
will be a good day.
light.
You lovingly caress my cheek.....then.I
drop my bowl.
dark.
My cheek is red.
dark.
school....."Shes
unanttentive, and does not focus in class" dark. dark. dark.
my hand caresses
my arm....
red.red.red.
dark.
~O.R
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A former member wrote:
This really, really shook me, hit me closer to heart than I would like to admit. A very sorrowful read.
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A former member wrote:
Loved this dark...sorry u have 2 go throúgh it.
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A former member wrote:
Ones who are hurt the most in life, tend to be the strongest ;). Youll do great things.
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On Thursday, June 21, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(429)
wrote:
Seems a delicate piece, to express bad things that happened. It seems you feel scared. Good piece :)
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A former member wrote:
Love this post! Dark, dark, light, dark..awesome usage of light and dark to express emotions! Welcome to dp!
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On Wednesday, June 6, 2012, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Oh wow .. I promise I love this more than anything. Dark.. I hold my own.. dark i love myself dark.. i love you dark.. hello there welcome to my world .. if you eva need anything i'm a click away.. dont be scared'
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On Sunday, June 17, 2012, TornPieces
(27) wrote:
Thank you so very much for this wonderful comment, im glad you enjoyed it as much as i enjoyed writing it :)
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