Monks
By TornPieces
Lets fold our hands child. In the name of trust
The child looks
at her feet from the chair,
dangling
staring
back at her like two still monks.
"we will keep you safe"
, say the small little feet.
She looks up and the woman
is staring at her, her mouth is moving
The mothers heavy
and worn body is behind the womans ear.
The woman speaks
"Are you alright child?, do you ever get punished in this house?"
She swings her little feet, and mimics the movement of
the swaying, praying monks
Her head says No,
The
womans back disappears behind the door.
Her mothers
hand raises
The shoes have become toes, curling
into flesh....
To escape the needled ends of the hands
who spoke her existance out of the womb.
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Author's Note:
When child services came to my house.Comments on "Monks"
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On Saturday, June 23, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Terriffic metaphor, completely unexpected, I can see the black patent leather shoes with white anklets perhaps. Well done!
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A former member wrote:
AWESOME!!!!! WIEEE!!! Keep writing, talent, talent, talent alert!
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On Sunday, June 24, 2012, TornPieces
(27) wrote:
Thank you so very much