Comments by CharlottesWeb
- "So soothing. Quiet and slow like ones early morning pondering would be. Quite beautiful and decadent in a minimalist fashion. It's 4:05am and this was a perfect poem to slow the world down just enough for another try at sleep. As always, hats off to your way with words. Thank you for sharing.
-CT"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Fleetingly awake" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "I feel your fears as profound in implication but so simple and at hand and you have effectively passed them on to me...or at least highlighted them to a shade I can not ignore. This still hits me hard, I can not leave this poem without a feeling of deep sadness. But for all the darkness this poem brings to my mood, I have to at least touch on how beautifully and eloquently it was crafted. "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Omne ignotum pro magnifico " by TropicalSnowstorm
- "Your travels are indeed impressive and envious...but to anyone else who had simply heard you had gone, they would only be "international trips" for which the thought left a faint and fast extinguishing whimsy on the tip of the brain.
It's the hand, the skill...but more then that it's the vision you write with that, melts my thoughts to a dreamy world just real enough to forget the dream part. Your going to have one hell of a collection of stories for your memoirs...and a crazy talent for writing them. "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "the Princess and the Impaler (vacation memories)" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "It's like you have to keep read, you can't stop, or your lose your way and have to start from the beginning again to get back to the place that matters the most in this...but thats every sentence, every word. The history of this makes all the more interes"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "empty space" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "Every once while, when I see painted fingernails this poem will come back to me. The act of which this poem is constructed around irritates me...now it will do more. Your detail sticks with a person. "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Chipped Nails" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "At the first stanza I was injected with happy feelings, hopeful thoughts...and well being. 2nd stanza...it was all gone...and the realistic perception of loneliness was clear. "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Popcorn sandals" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "The boy is putting so much effort into it....and dad looks like he wants to get up and help him! It's wonderfully precious. I wonder if you were able to give a copy to father and son? Thank you for sharing."
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Role Reversal" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "This has that long faced sadness of a grey day harboring a slight wind...the kind you've seen your self in a hundred times, but never actualy expereinced. I loved this...your writting has a power and a..a...grace to it. "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Romeo Took a Lover" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "Sincere honesty in this one, that is to me a bit scary just because of the relentlessness of it. I came here looking for something to chew on and got it. Lovely work. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Strange Angels" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "I wonder how long it took you to write this, because I'm sure it'll take me so much longer to be able to see it "all" at the same time. It's as if not a thought has been spared nor a point wasted and each line could inspire a book of poems it self. You ar"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Evidence of the Window" by TropicalSnowstorm
- "This felt very nice. Kinda like snow melting into a warm clean and clear puddle. And guaranteed… which was comforting. I enjoyed it…thank you for sharing this with us:). ~DW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Mandatory Migration" by TropicalSnowstorm
