Comments by FadedBlues
- "...this is profound, well worded. the repetition of 'sparkling' in the same line is a notable device. I've explored the idea of a poem attempting to break the reader, & thus itself being broken in retaliation..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "The Mead of Poetry" by metaphormachine
- "...in the glow of the pearl's beauty, we are able to forget the oyster that died for it. (poetry stimulates me in unnatural ways)..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Pearl" by metaphormachine
- "...nice style, so freakin' Cummings. his other fans here will enjoy it also.
he's also influenced some of my writing. obviously, my fav poet..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "The Sweet Ass" by metaphormachine
- "...this is imbued w/words & phrases that float, refusing to remain attached to the page. it has a taste of Cummings, who freely used the word 'meanwhile'..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Hummingbird Feather" by metaphormachine
