Waited For One Hour to Solero
By metaphormachine
The Balance test
in the cold room
waited & sat
on & off
from time to time
do people
come today.
Solero is shut
when daredevil hard
celebration
a blue
daredevil
demon lord
rules list
administration.
A control request
the blues
you take me for a
daredevil
at my window
wait & hang
maintained & owned
to play & pay
outstanding dues
your own bequest
in west.
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Copyright 2013 metaphormachine
Published on Wednesday, February 13, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Poem 28 - Book 11 of 15 - At the Times When I Woke Up & Myself Like the Lemmings Should Behave – 3. Literal Pictures [In Color] -Comments on "Waited For One Hour to Solero"
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On Friday, February 15, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Sweet you have a style all of your own.. which makes you awesome.. thank you for your comments i do appreciate you very much.. much love poet.
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On Saturday, February 16, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Oh, thanks, that's sweet of you, my dear ... & I appreciate you very much too. Hm, I'm a little unsure what do you mean with comments ... my poems?! But thanks for your reading & comment ... I'm very honored, sweet pretty dear! Much love, critic ... :)
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On Thursday, February 14, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...sounds to me like some1 in a train or bus station, people watching, thinking odd thoughts...
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On Saturday, February 16, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Solero was written at a time, in the early summer, as I have often sat here on a bench near where I have a look around here in my residential area. It was a time of many changes. Solero stands for the sun, where I sat for an hour and a person who will pick me up for a new period of my life. Therefore you could speak of odd thoughts, yes, FB!? Thanks again for your reading & comment! :)