Waited For One Hour to Solero

By metaphormachine

The Balance test

in the cold room

waited & sat

on & off

from time to time

do people

come today.

 

Solero is shut

when daredevil hard

celebration

a blue

daredevil

demon lord

rules list

administration.

 

A control request

the blues

you take me for a

daredevil

at my window

wait & hang

maintained & owned

to play & pay

outstanding dues

your own bequest

in west.

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Copyright 2013 metaphormachine
Published on Wednesday, February 13, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Poem 28 - Book 11 of 15 - At the Times When I Woke Up & Myself Like the Lemmings Should Behave – 3. Literal Pictures [In Color] -
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  • Devilish On Friday, February 15, 2013, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Sweet you have a style all of your own.. which makes you awesome.. thank you for your comments i do appreciate you very much.. much love poet. Scholar

  • metaphormachine On Saturday, February 16, 2013, metaphormachine (133)By person wrote:

    Oh, thanks, that's sweet of you, my dear ... & I appreciate you very much too. Hm, I'm a little unsure what do you mean with comments ... my poems?! But thanks for your reading & comment ... I'm very honored, sweet pretty dear! Much love, critic ... :)

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, February 14, 2013, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    ...sounds to me like some1 in a train or bus station, people watching, thinking odd thoughts...

  • metaphormachine On Saturday, February 16, 2013, metaphormachine (133)By person wrote:

    Solero was written at a time, in the early summer, as I have often sat here on a bench near where I have a look around here in my residential area. It was a time of many changes. Solero stands for the sun, where I sat for an hour and a person who will pick me up for a new period of my life. Therefore you could speak of odd thoughts, yes, FB!? Thanks again for your reading & comment! :)

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