The Sweet Ass

The sweet ass of rejects

at the hotel bar, while some

opening times & hours

the prices are lower & the smiles sweeter

no happy hour beer, but it tastes

anyway & very reason.

I like this

feeling of sitting at the bar, & not

the fear of having to have

that someone would be with me

of reading comprehension, know then

to the observer, feeling

to grow, in this knowledge

anyway & very reason.

Straightaway you go

bathing with your wife

& maybe & happy & why

like, in the floods

in bathtub the bathwater or the sea

far in front of the hotel

stirred & thunderously

as the sometimes similar passion

between

you

& us

anyway & very reason.

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Published on Sunday, January 13, 2013. Filed under: "Poetry"

Poem 13 - Book 7 of 15 - My Word - The Void / God Views - The Void -

Comments on "The Sweet Ass"

On Thursday, January 17, 2013, PoetessDarkly (700) wrote:

awesome imagery! love the ending it brings closure to this masterpiece. welcome to DP
On Sunday, January 20, 2013, metaphormachine (133) wrote:

Thanks PD for your welcome, comment & praise. Nice, that you've enjoyed the ending of my written work & that you've got an imagery with this little view of my poetry books ...
On Sunday, January 13, 2013, Electric-Chair (122) wrote:

Clever style, love the touble thoughts nice write
On Monday, January 14, 2013, metaphormachine (133) wrote:

Now I will sit myself with many thanks on the DP's Electric-Chair ... Your praise electrifies me ...
On Sunday, January 13, 2013, FadedBlues (2169) wrote:

...nice style, so freakin' Cummings. his other fans here will enjoy it also. he's also influenced some of my writing. obviously, my fav poet...
On Monday, January 14, 2013, metaphormachine (133) wrote:

Thanks, FadedBlues! For your nice words & criticism every time ... You have funny words in use ... :) I hope I have soon a little more time ... myself quiet ... to face up to your works ...