Comments by dwells

  • "Welcome to DP, you'll fit right in! Wondering where the color green came from, maybe your favorite? A sorrowful and all to common tale, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Black" by TornPieces
  • "The daddy bit was telling, and looms large in my mind. A stark and unsettling story, right underneath your teeth? Pondering rot or choking perhaps, most enigmatic, and cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "I'm a Cute Girl " by TornPieces
  • "Sounds like two lost souls sharing a very personal moment in a desolate place perhaps. Pondering some old and maybe unanswerable questions. Very well done, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Frozen Innocence." by TornPieces
  • "Quite the metaphor, had me going in the beginning thinking decapitation maybe (whew!) Cheers and well done."
    Posted by dwells on "Perfect Plate" by TornPieces
  • "Terriffic metaphor, completely unexpected, I can see the black patent leather shoes with white anklets perhaps. Well done!"
    Posted by dwells on "Monks" by TornPieces
  • "Very spooky and wondering if the body and the spirit of the little girl were one and the same. Does conjure up a variety of images but that was probably the intention, thanks TP."
    Posted by dwells on "The Witchcraft trick" by TornPieces
  • "School teacher or perhaps bus driver who did not hear your plea, still pondering and very clever use of hand(s) as a metaphor for life, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Find me" by TornPieces
  • "Lying to hide the hurt, the crime, the shame, and even perhaps further abuse. Seriously sobering, thanks."
    Posted by dwells on "I am a Liar" by TornPieces
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