What is a Pretend Family?
By TornPieces
Do you have a pretend family? asked the little boy with a wrinkled nose.
"No...what in the world is that?"
asked the man...who did not want
to pay attention to what seemed to be,
a snotty boy.
The boy stared from the park bench...and pointed to a woman holding
her baby.
"thats my pretend mother, isnt she beautiful and nice..."
The man nodded, without a single word...
"and that! , thats my
pretend uncle...and those children...they,
they are my pretend
brothers and sisters...we are going on a trip..see all the bags?"
The man took a bite out of his sandwich...
Pretend Uncle
Rob, Mommy , Daddy, sister and brother... we all live in a big pretend
house.
If we are bad, we just get pancakes! said the boy picking
up a small crumb from the bench and eating it.
"uh huh, Listen
kid, I dont care...nobody cares ok?"
The boy stared at the man...and
tears started to show in his eyes...
The boy looked up and saw
another man across him...sitting on a bench and pointed..
"what?"
asked the man...
the boy looked down at his bruised wrists
and arms..
and he said without looking up
"thats the pretend
man, who does care. He might save me."
~Torn
(This originates from a game I used to play at school...when
I was a kid, it was too painful for me to think I could go home to my
real family...so I would pretend my teachers, friends, or whoever really...was
my family.)
Comments on "What is a Pretend Family?"
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On Monday, September 10, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
So good to read an original idea put to words, much enjoyed the pathos, cheers!
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On Monday, September 10, 2012, MikeShank1989
(93) wrote:
This literally had me tearing up. Shit that was intense. Well done!