Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- "Do we simply rot, or do we answer for our deeds? Did the world really 'stand still' on some day of importance to us, or did we momentarily lose touch with something that never does..."
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "seventeen years" by Jonas
- ""it reminded them
briefly
that to live is to
die". The fleeting excercises, which are, in truth, rituals to assist us in denying this simple truth...
"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "seventeen years" by Jonas
- "Oh, and DP mail me the address where I can send the hats to you. We have Fedex service in Herat now."
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "fillmore" by Jonas
- "Fantastic piece! I love the lines "i can still hear throbbing
in every dirty grain of sand
this city's concrete blanket" - I feel something like that when I go to Memphis on Beale Street. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "fillmore" by Jonas
- "set-up, and I love the way prince charming evolves into Frankenstein. You have a great style! Ciao, T/S
"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "buzzkill" by Jonas
- ""i think cinderella stories
set
an impossible precedent
'cause once charming has done all
he can do
for the ego and the libido
the grass
across the way" - fantastic "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "buzzkill" by Jonas
- "Wonderful piece, man! I love the lines "it's sad to see him wonder
about the features
of the child that never left the arms of god
but he'll often smile
in the midst of this
and i think he's hearing the whisper
and it bears forgivness" "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "mr. van pelt" by Jonas
- "Loved it! There are so many great turns of phrase within this one - that's it, you're on my fav list."
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "sin" by Jonas
- "I really feel this one - I love the line "The salt-tang of the air is
Bittersweet memory,
Like the eyes of first love". Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "LightHouse" by Jonas
