Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- ""poetry is nothing
but pointless vandalism.
so I spray on.
and destruction has never felt so good." - great line! I also especially liked "in the way that cameras capture the past.
pictures are never worth the words spoken in time", which I found myself rereading several times. Love this one! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "secrets[&]stories" by Six-Out
- "I too really love the lines quoted by Dying_Angel, this is indeed a delicate, beautiful piece that is coloured with sadness. Love your work. Ciao,
T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "hopelessly.poetic." by Six-Out
- "The contrasting images of tears, hollowpoints and silk wings intertwined in that description are so effective in conveying the mixed emotions present when a romance is over... Really great job. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "-tears. of_ lead" by Six-Out
- "I love the flow and feel of this piece - my favourite lines out of many good ones are "on a splintered summer morning
your -tears of lead- fall into my chest
hollowpoints:: on silk wings of perfections". "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "-tears. of_ lead" by Six-Out
