Comments by Dilated View
- "Miss you and your pen man. Loved the conflicting concepts in here. When the world is a bitter place we find our escape, create a better reality. It doesn't make the world change, but maybe it shifts our perspective just enough to put up with it for a while. Come back and write sometime."
Posted by Dilated View on "lost in lucidity -" by Six-Out
- "This felt frantic to me. As though if the words would just come you would have the perspective you need but time works against you. May be off in my understanding but enjoyed it all the same."
Posted by Dilated View on ".combustion." by Six-Out
- "Yes. This. Experiences are what define us. I often feel like I am limbo stuck between the heaven of action and the hell of inaction. I can think of no worse fate than one of staleness. And yet what are words if the heart does not follow its own lead? Let me know if you figure this out."
Posted by Dilated View on "Coal Walker." by Six-Out
- "The last big stanza man, shook me. Sometimes it feels like things would be easier if they did indeed play out like a storybook. Well said sir, this felt restless to me and yet serene too. Well done."
Posted by Dilated View on "conflicted." by Six-Out
- "Sometimes when your mind goes all blah and the thought cycles don't flow in a way that is conducive to figuring shit out sleep is the best way to recharge. This was serene and sad but enjoyed."
Posted by Dilated View on "waves." by Six-Out
- "Hard hitting man. I can't really tell you how I feel about this. I know the emotions, I've been here, but that's not very helpful. I hope when you wake up your dream continues. "
Posted by Dilated View on "feeling." by Six-Out
- "In this case I would say letters make wonderful legs. Often they aren't enough and end up being very cardboard-esque. This left me weak, thanks for that."
Posted by Dilated View on "habitual." by Six-Out
