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Comments by carlosjackal

"I really like this version..seems a lot tighter than the original although there was nothing wrong with it..Great stuff!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "whores in the night (rewritten and retitled)" by alaskanamber

"Vivid, evocative and bloody frightening! This was brilliantly done, and I really liked the last 2 lines to close the poem with. Write on, Lady.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "insomnia reigns in black days" by alaskanamber

"This was sweet release indeed..Write on.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "dark poetry in vain" by alaskanamber

"This was awful to read because it was so raw and honest..pain beyond pain..Write on.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "a voice" by alaskanamber

"I loved this. The anxiety and panic at the start, the escape out onto the streets and finally the release of tears and demons to relieve the soul and bring back the sunshine. Great write."
Posted by carlosjackal on "black butterflies of panic" by alaskanamber

"Excellent write, Amber. Another succinct effort with some truly great lines."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Thief Liar Demon" by alaskanamber

"I like this. Those times when we feel the pressure of society tearing at us like maniacal claws at the brain, when all we need is a little empathy. Excellent write."
Posted by carlosjackal on "the rubber ball that gags me" by alaskanamber

"An excellent sonnet, with some great rhymes and a heartfelt message."
Posted by carlosjackal on "saying goodbye to hate" by alaskanamber

"Stunning imagery, Top Write."
Posted by carlosjackal on "untitled #1" by alaskanamber

"Wow..this is superb. Line after great line..capturing a moment magnifcently and I loved the conclusion. Welcome to DP."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Anatomy of an Orgasm" by alaskanamber

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