Anatomy of an Orgasm

By alaskanamber

Your touch, so tender and sweet, sets me afire.
Moving slowly at first, our kisses roam as we reach for each other.
Gentle carresses cause my breath to catch, become shallow.
Clothing falls away like autumn leaves,
drifting slowly to settle at our feet.
Skin on skin, lips on lips, once standing we are now supine.
Your lovers touch evokes gasps of pleasure.
My breasts rising and falling frantically,
Match the pace of your racing heart.
Looking into thine lovers eyes, our visions blur,
And we reach yet for more.
Now moving against each other you whisper my name,
A powerful word that travels down my spine.
All our love and emotions explode like a star born,
And I cry out, clinging to you.
Held by our passions I snuggle deeper in your arms,
Knowing should the stars fall from the sky,
Or the oceans run dry,
That we have loved.

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© 2006 rednecksgirl
Published on Tuesday, December 5, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • LOKI On Monday, December 11, 2006, LOKI (164)By person wrote:

    I think you explained it quite well.Good write.: )

  • A former member wrote: Wow, My heart skipped a beat when I finished this as a slight smile ran across my lips:-) ][ ][

  • A former member wrote: wow. *smiles* you are welcome hun

  • alaskanamber On Tuesday, December 5, 2006, alaskanamber (64)By person wrote:

    Thank you. Lets say I had great inspiration.

  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, December 5, 2006, carlosjackal (3014)By person wrote:

    Wow..this is superb. Line after great line..capturing a moment magnifcently and I loved the conclusion. Welcome to DP.

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