Comments by RubyXero
- "probably?...not. Interesting piece. a lot going on here. sad but a part of life as any...i feel sad for the children. who grow up to have their own children that feel just like they did with their parents. terrible repetitious cycle. well written..."
Posted by RubyXero on "are you dancing Jessica?" by Taunting The Reaper
- "very vivid imagery here. i admit that i am like after hours was...i prefer the demons to humans...much more entertaining. wonderfully descriptive. i could feel the sweat and taste the fear...salty."
Posted by RubyXero on "sharp faces in the dark" by Taunting The Reaper
- "i would have to agree with lip.sticky whore...those last two lines were just perfect. very nice. the whole piece was a kind of quiet, pretty feeling. romance usually is...but you bring in a bit of darkness with it as well with the shadows and talons and such. lovely :)"
Posted by RubyXero on "the road to nowhere" by Taunting The Reaper
- "hmmm...a little romance in with the chase of chaos. i loved the rough hands stanza...moving to me... i'd take a hand, worn and calloused... worked with and strong over a soft, flamin' bone weakening excuse of a man anyday. :) lovely write as always"
Posted by RubyXero on "letting the jackals wait" by Taunting The Reaper
- "beautiful. nature speaks in words that i heed to. but, as your first stanza states, not very much others do. i love this. its really heart warming. and i'm glad you pay attention to it... "
Posted by RubyXero on "feeding the earth" by Taunting The Reaper
- "I love you! this was excellent. as soon as i read the like "you may think me arrogant..." and thereafter a smile spread across this wicked face. for i thrive on beauty in its violent seductions. yup yup. i'd be right there dancing with you were i in the situation"
Posted by RubyXero on "tonight I rode the storm" by Taunting The Reaper
- "Oh my! that was just...wow! i was stuck on that first line for a minute there. i just love that. but as expected the greatness followed throughout each proceeding word...line...and stanza. your mind is wonderful!"
Posted by RubyXero on "scars under umbrellas" by Taunting The Reaper
- "nice image there. i like how you brought in the discription of the church bells with that simile. "Conform! Conform. Follow the way" tho i'd gladly suffer through a day in hypocrisy preached sermons then be a slave to the sleepless white demon. wonderfully written."
Posted by RubyXero on "stiletto street sex" by Taunting The Reaper
- "i love your attitude in this. sad though...but true how life is. turning away so we can live in denial while others fall. i wish i could help everyone for my heart aches when i read your words. but your passion is so comforting. thank you"
Posted by RubyXero on "smoldering castles in the sky" by Taunting The Reaper
- "wow. this piece was brilliant. your skill knows no end. excellent similies and metaphors. description was amazing. this is and instant fav. loved it. keep it up. you are excellent. :)"
Posted by RubyXero on "blooming in grief" by Taunting The Reaper
- "lovely piece. the faith...wow. that was a great metaphor. the last stanza was wonderful indeed. so beautiful. your words bring out the beauty... i love it. :)"
Posted by RubyXero on "shine" by Taunting The Reaper
- "i would have to agree. that was beautifully written indeed. a lovely picture of life in its beauty, prime and death"
Posted by RubyXero on "falling" by Taunting The Reaper
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