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  • "Your twists never fail to surprise me, I should see it coming and yet I didn’t, I was sucked in from the first stanza. Waylon Jennings meets gore, I love it! 💕"
    Posted by IamZero on "Back to How Things Were" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "I like this, because it can be interpreted in so many ways! I can see it in the spiritual sense, as 13 has mentioned. I have struggled with Social Anxiety, and have also felt that when I am in an area with a bunch of people I do not know. Well done! Look forward to hearing more from you!"
    Posted by Hope in despair on "Always..." by Commander_Cadaver
  • "For a split second, you had me fooled until you pulled out the butterfly knife! haha, I should have expected a twist and yet I didn’t which is why I love your pieces. Setting some butterflies free! 💕 🦋 "
    Posted by IamZero on "Butterflies" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "This is really good, though also quite sad. I love your comparison to paper. It's a near perfect simile, in my opinion. Most people start off pretty strong until someone hurts them, similar to how paper starts off strong and sturdy as a tree until a person comes along and turns the wood into a flimsy blank page."
    Posted by braht on "Paper" by Commander_Cadaver
  • "I cringed as well when it got to the last of cutting her Achilles’ tendons >.< Just the haunting imagery I needed for tonight. Thank you sir. "
    Posted by IamZero on "Three Little Kisses" by Commander_Cadaver
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