Comments by All Members
- "I suck at comments, but this is amazing. You are the best, and there's a reason we're best friends. You're the best ever.♥"
Posted by PoeticHellion on "Truth" by Aethelwyne
- "Bravo, indeed. You are amazing, Sarah. Quiet and elusive, but amazing all the same."
Posted by Thorn on "Truth" by Aethelwyne
- ""Embracing the most beautiful darkness, we find /That touching the truth /Means loosing our minds" this mind numbing stanza cannot be silenced... you've revealed to me the nature of truth... it is irony and paradox... thanks
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Posted by Unknown on "Truth" by Aethelwyne
- "ouch.... damn this. this disembowels..... alive. harsh. I particularly like the clouded by a memory.. the sky metaphor works wonders here, graceful and potent."
Posted by Unknown on "Turned" by Aethelwyne
- "when you cut for attention
and rave of affection
but mean nothing at all
this is when you shall fall
now you're torn to shreads
without any threads
of the sarah that used to be
*ice*"
Posted by icyhott on "Turned" by Aethelwyne
- "Sarah, I am here for you no matter what, and you will never lose me. You can tell me what's going on and I'm not going to turn on you. Not ever. Best friends forever. Yes. Forever."
Posted by PoeticHellion on "Turned" by Aethelwyne
- "You COULD prove your inner strength and iron will to those who tried to break you and keep on keepin' on in spite of everything. I would highly recommend this route, and I'm here to help you if ever you need me."
Posted by Thorn on "Turned" by Aethelwyne
- "Well then. I like how it starts off getting right to the point. I end my life! And then the thoughts about the incident, and then the actions that take place afterwards, cool shite :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Ghost" by Aethelwyne
- "Oh my...I have missed your words...and now, you've come back with a BANG and have shattered me to pieces. The rhyme scheme is beautiful, and the imagery...the message...all of it, shall surely become the mantra I wake up muttering in the night. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "Hidden Hearts" by Aethelwyne
- "To love is good. Sublime. But to be loved, and to know beyond a shadow of a doubt that love it is. That's the clincher. that's everything. Beautifuly written, and taken to heart. Much love."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Hidden Hearts" by Aethelwyne
- "damn. if this isnt something all can relate to the i dont know what it. keep it up and if you are referring to yourself as we usually do when we write, believe me when i say "get off your ass and go after it!""
Posted by fenix2337 on "Hidden Hearts" by Aethelwyne
- "a refreshing shift in perspective... pointed critique of suicide voiced with rhyme and style, very polished...perfect!"
Posted by Unknown on "Ghost" by Aethelwyne
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