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Turned
By Aethelwyne
When all you’ve ever known is wrong
And everyone you’ve ever loved is gone
What else can you do but just to move along
And hope that you can carry on
When everything you could once see
Has been clouded by a memory
What can you do but cut and bleed
And slip through time in misery
When death has become a welcome friend
What can you do but greet the end
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© 2006 Aethelwyne
Published on Tuesday, March 21, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Turned"
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A former member wrote:
ouch.... damn this. this disembowels..... alive. harsh. I particularly like the clouded by a memory.. the sky metaphor works wonders here, graceful and potent.
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On Friday, April 28, 2006, Nail Bunny
(161)
wrote:
No!! Don't do it!! Killing yourself isn't the answer!!
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On Friday, April 28, 2006, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
I really like this work, though. It is short, simple, focused, and fabulous.
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On Tuesday, March 28, 2006, icyhott
(37) wrote:
when you cut for attention and rave of affection but mean nothing at all this is when you shall fall now you're torn to shreads without any threads of the sarah that used to be *ice*
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On Tuesday, April 25, 2006, Thorn
(283) wrote:
And whose fault is that, Jess?
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On Wednesday, March 29, 2006, Aethelwyne
(51) wrote:
fuck you jess. you know nothing of who ive become or what has been done.
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Sarah, I am here for you no matter what, and you will never lose me. You can tell me what's going on and I'm not going to turn on you. Not ever. Best friends forever. Yes. Forever.
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On Tuesday, March 21, 2006, Thorn
(283) wrote:
You COULD prove your inner strength and iron will to those who tried to break you and keep on keepin' on in spite of everything. I would highly recommend this route, and I'm here to help you if ever you need me.
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