Comments by All Members

"Susinct and thoughtful. A gentle positive ending that lifts the weight of the content. Loss is never easy, especially on certain days but this brings a spark of hope as well. "
Posted by NikesRain on "...Above the Clouds" by SolApathy

"Time truly does heal all wounds. It can be downright cruel. Good to see you still writing my friend."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "...Above the Clouds" by SolApathy

"Sadness and longing, much more in this time, yet finding solace in the idea that your beloved found some peace in the end... very intense stuff indeed. Liked this one."
Posted by LIFEINVADER on "...Above the Clouds" by SolApathy

"Memories can sometimes make us feel like a shell of our former selves, escaping is quite hard indeed. Nice choice of accompaniment, too, in the right mind, touches a few very old strings."
Posted by LIFEINVADER on "…Vessel " by SolApathy

"Dark and melancholic and somehow you manage to write it so beautifully. Great work."
Posted by IamZero on "...Failed Intent" by SolApathy

"Life becomes the epitome of nihilism all too often. Thank you both for your replies. "
Posted by SolApathy on "...Failed Intent" by SolApathy

"If anyone asks for a concept of nihilism I'd just point here, cheers."
Posted by LIFEINVADER on "...Failed Intent" by SolApathy

"well, if you were going for dark and dismal, you nailed it, friend. liked the musical accompaniment, and the author's note, as well. thanks."
Posted by Patches on "...Failed Intent" by SolApathy

"Hope is my broken angel. Thank you for your words, they mean a lot. "
Posted by SolApathy on "...Null_Space" by SolApathy

"Thank you for reading and commenting on my work. I appreciate it. "
Posted by SolApathy on "...Null_Space" by SolApathy

"Living, trapped in the end-game memories, knowing you can never touch those moments again has left me in a place I just haven't been able to escape. I try to smile, I try to move beyond...And yet all I hear is the same sad song. Thank you for all of the comments, I appreciate it and know I am far from the only person that has suffered a tragic loss, though as people who have suffered a tragic loss can attest--- That offers little consolation. "
Posted by SolApathy on "...Null_Space" by SolApathy

"I appreciate the emotional depth of this piece, and it reminds me of your previous work. It seems to convey a sense of feeling trapped and unable to move forward, which is a difficult situation to be in. I can empathize with these emotions, as I've felt similarly in my life, and I understand how painful it can be to find a way out. Nonetheless, I hope that you're able to overcome these challenges and find a path forward. Keep creating, cheers."
Posted by LIFEINVADER on "...Null_Space" by SolApathy

"When the soul is long dead before the body ever is and all the mind wants is to join the soul too; for final peace; for the pain to be at an end. Heart breaking poem that makes me wish you could find even just a chink of hope to bring that first slither of light back into a dark life."
Posted by carlosjackal on "...Null_Space" by SolApathy

"...Perhaps, though the question becomes ---Is it a soul that can be saved or is darkness all that remains? "
Posted by SolApathy on "...Demons caress a sunset sky" by SolApathy

"...I appreciate your thoughts. "
Posted by SolApathy on "...Demons caress a sunset sky" by SolApathy

"In the broken recesses of a shattered mind My soul crosses a line Burdened by the darkness of time Can’t see a path to redemption Resigned to knowing I’ll never be whole What becomes of this battered soul? ^^^ this right here is the good stuff. ? "
Posted by The-Ardent on "...Demons caress a sunset sky" by SolApathy

""If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you still have a soul left to lose." - Bukowski"
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "...Demons caress a sunset sky" by SolApathy

"Thank you... I just wish the feelings of despair would fade as her voice has in my mind... "
Posted by SolApathy on "...Demons caress a sunset sky" by SolApathy

"A heart-wrenching reflection on the struggle with a shattered mind, the burden of memories, and the quest for redemption. Nice one!"
Posted by LIFEINVADER on "...Demons caress a sunset sky" by SolApathy

"A moving and powerful piece that effectively conveys the complex emotions associated with grief and loss. Nice one."
Posted by LIFEINVADER on "…Aftershocks " by SolApathy

"Beautiful image and sullen pen that compliment each other perfectly. Always a pleasure to stumble upon your writes "
Posted by River Lily on "…Song of the Swan" by SolApathy

"The use of vivid language and imagery creates a strong emotional impact that resonates hard within me, I can feel the despair and hopelessness, crowned by a sense of acceptance. Cheers."
Posted by LIFEINVADER on "…Song of the Swan" by SolApathy

"Your style is distinctive, w every stop and start pulling the reader through, powerful stuff bro. Perfect fucking ending "
Posted by Adagios on "…Song of the Swan" by SolApathy

"Beautiful, wise message behind the words. Takes a lot of strength to take something that causes so much pain and turn into something so much more than that. "
Posted by River Lily on "...Fret" by SolApathy

"new song for this... As the old one has long been extinguished... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4RgQ-JDiOic"
Posted by SolApathy on "...Charades of Tinsel " by SolApathy

"Sorry my last comment was just supposed to be hearts and for some reason it was question marks. Anyway. Love the work! "
Posted by Willow Wept on "...Matter? " by SolApathy

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