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  • "A whimsical grotesquerie of a geographic fantasy that comes with no travel brochure, I'm sure. The bugs gave this that extra creepy flavor for certain DL. Also, the cryptic feeling imbued by your opening, left the helpless reader with a sense of falling Cheers and hoping the round trip ticket was a bargain! - Dan"
    Posted by dwells on "zooming down a shocking blu highway" by Devil lyn
  • "Good job on this poem, I like the reference of kids to sugar because when we were Young we are taught to eat a lot of junk food filled with sugar. I am a diabetic and I can tell ya sugar is addicting and one of the most evil things ever made by man. For some people yes it's genetic but I think it's mostly because of the American diet. I like your font choice as well. Keep up the good work."
    Posted by Poeticexorcism on "if you ask me, Mother Goose was just another scapegoat" by Devil lyn
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