if you ask me, Mother Goose was just another scapegoat
By Devil lyn
a red Rose
is the least of a Child`s interest
only that it`s the main color
in a box of crayons next to black; and
the color of their favorite toy car; and
the color of a little girl`s dress
that isn`t quite a Sunday best
if it has laces and bows
and shows above the knees;
Violet is a flower
and has no memory of being blue
if it`s blue it`s due
to the children stepping and
stomping on their whimsical petals
as children can be so quite cruel;
no unusual punishment there …
children don’t know
that they are succulent sweet
they only know how to eat the Sugar
then they think you`re a perv
for using such a dirty word
to describe them;
to an Adult there is nothing
rosey about red that
it only brings dread on Valentine`s Day
if she doesn`t receive her dozen Roses
all vibrant, long stemmed, un`thorny
if you`re expected to be loved by her at all;
lovers do not think of Violets of blue
they are not botanists just civilians
trying to survive the headaches of
fashioning a garden to entertain the sane;
bring color to life in an obvious ashen world;
and what of the Sugar
as we are all obviously not as sweet
like the treats found in a drug store;
we are sour and sore and we want more
than what our cavities can endure …
Author's Note:
6/2018 - analyzing ``Roses Are Red``, 1784 Mother Goose Nursery RhymeComments on "if you ask me, Mother Goose was just another scapegoat"
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On Wednesday, July 4, 2018, Poeticexorcism
(84) wrote:
Good job on this poem, I like the reference of kids to sugar because when we were Young we are taught to eat a lot of junk food filled with sugar. I am a diabetic and I can tell ya sugar is addicting and one of the most evil things ever made by man. For some people yes it's genetic but I think it's mostly because of the American diet. I like your font choice as well. Keep up the good work.
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On Tuesday, July 3, 2018, Cattarax
(210) wrote:
I love flowers tainted and tinged black ~*Cat*~
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On Sunday, July 1, 2018, Drea
(1388) wrote:
There are so many dimensions to your writing. The visuals and the way you articulate things take these words to another place. The choice of font was also a great touch.
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On Sunday, July 1, 2018, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
Loved the analysis. I have always enjoyed the challenge of describing color or other perceptions of our senses. Sound and touch/feel are a little easier but taste and color are much harder because the very words we use to describe these things are what we are describing. Like how do you describe salty or sweet with out using those words or the food itself. I wrote a poem called Tribute to Red if you want to check it out sometime.