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"I like that ending line a lot. well done"
Posted by Cassette on "The Faculty of False Thumbs" by Abberant

"Sounds to me like two online personas living in a virtual reality. The opposable thumbs was a nice, human gesture. Cheers Ab! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "The Faculty of False Thumbs" by Abberant

"blankness and hollows was a haunting ending."
Posted by Cassette on "Bone Wreath" by Abberant

"... and float we do. what a piece, i'll be back for more. -sym"
Posted by Symbol on "Auburn Etch-A-Sketch" by Abberant

"Well... this is certainly uplifting! Nice! ~worm~"
Posted by worm on "Auburn Etch-A-Sketch" by Abberant

"This resonates in ways I just wish it wouldn't. Nonetheless, I am thankful to have it articulated"
Posted by Maladroit on "The Bewildering Travels To Ennui" by Abberant

"Reminds me a bit of Monty Python's Black Knight at the bridge, Ab. Dispossessing oneself of those extra appendages to attain the desired state of functionality in the darkness. Perfect!. Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "The Bewildering Travels To Ennui" by Abberant

"Thanks for this powerfull write. Very strong, thank you for sharing. "
Posted by The lost and the found on "The Bewildering Travels To Ennui" by Abberant

"I believe that you reached your goal with me. I felt more than I understood the words written."
Posted by Unknown on "Mice More Wise Than Cheese" by Abberant

"palpable fear and death by a thousand cuts , knowing of the trap doesn't lessen the pain ... I thought the elephant / mouse / cheese spoke volumes on levels of courage ... the mouse also could represent communication if it were a computer mouse ... always a pleasure to ponder , may peace of mind find you ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Mice More Wise Than Cheese" by Abberant

"Peanut butter works best in my palm rat traps Ab. This was a metaphorical marvel on fear and the enigmatic title indicates a survival preference above the mundane. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Mice More Wise Than Cheese" by Abberant

"Wonderful words, formed beautifully, as always. Thanks for the read. ~RTBH~ "
Posted by RoseTheBrokenHearted on "Mice More Wise Than Cheese" by Abberant

"Powerful thoughts laid bare poeticly. .Very well done."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Thoughts Of Mediocre Living" by Abberant

"I like the way you pay attention to the way the words sound together just as much as the meaning. "I wept them-slowly", what a rare line, wrapped in emotion and all that people think they might see...and all that really lies beneath."
Posted by syzygy on "Bone Wreath" by Abberant

"it's like teflon...any attempt at adhering something solid to it just slips right off...I love it :)"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Bone Wreath" by Abberant

"Wow this is really powerful great work."
Posted by Karebear on "Thoughts Of Mediocre Living" by Abberant

"There's a smell of blood I get when I eat pieces of myself...that is a powerful line...like that a lot! -Xie Xie "
Posted by Unknown on "Thoughts Of Mediocre Living" by Abberant

"I'm gonna agree with spikedwithLust. Your writings are unique. This one is hard to decipher. I thought I knew what it was about then I think it changed on me. No matter I still like it. You are interesting."
Posted by Willow Wept on "'Oh' Spoke Anguish" by Abberant

"i have to be honest, i may not be able to decipher every piece of yours, but i've read them all. there is something pretty unique about your writing. i'll keep checking for your posts. welcome to dp. "
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "'Oh' Spoke Anguish" by Abberant

"Yes, the language and visuals in this piece were quite intriguing. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Bone Wreath" by Abberant

"i really enjoyed all the language in this, particularly the third stanza. i guess some people build their own realities"
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Bone Wreath" by Abberant

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