Comments by All Members
- "The last comment I left on this poem was in 2004. I was 14, and am now 17. I came back to DP, and this and "The Gleam of Insects" have literaly changed my life. I would say: you, and both of these poems down as life changing works of art. I thought you ma"
Posted by Rone4611 on "Tangerine Lights, Star Crossed" by BeautifulCalamity
- ""flicker of the
almost emptied sun." Enchanting poem; an emerald gem. "Crooked glances and clumsy-versed
speeches of regret the next morning.." Love the enigmatic, parallel layers. It is quite "curved and delirious" in style. Tempus fugit! very well don"
Posted by Unknown on "Sugar-Rimmed Wine Glass [t]Rip" by BeautifulCalamity
- "This struck a vein with me as i was reading it. I could picture the speaker in this poem so vividly. I am really enjoying your ability, here, to create a living image in my mind."
Posted by steuss on "Dec[ember]High" by BeautifulCalamity
- "Oh Leagh ann, your words are the most lovely. Even more beautiful then the sky and the stars. You write stories so beatufiully from your fingertips. :) This was most wonderful."
Posted by K_Love on "musclerelaxedteenagerNo7" by BeautifulCalamity
- "i love the part about stumbling too fast...i love how you call the person 'wonder', like in your other poems, how you always call them adjectives like that. but most of all, i love your imagry. beautiful.
~lauren~"
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "musclerelaxedteenagerNo7" by BeautifulCalamity
- ""I could silently bring about songs
melodies of breath against breath on a quilt, bloodied only by friction of loving in the sweetest of ways"- this is so gorgeous, and flowed perfectly. the way you string words together is flawless."
Posted by Unknown on "musclerelaxedteenagerNo7" by BeautifulCalamity
- "i'm floating down the dreaming river on your december high. i print it out, snip it up and roll it around the hope that fluidity will visit me next."
Posted by odetobarbie on "Dec[ember]High" by BeautifulCalamity
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