Comments by All Members
- "Very well spoken. Fantastic thought out preception and depth to this masterful story. Truly a fine glass of poetry. My sister is a violinist and is quite talented. I have always connected with the mournful rhythms produced by the bow and strings harmony.
Sorry that it has been a while since I've read you."
Posted by Unknown on "The Violin" by Phantasmagoria
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Yep have felt this before. Feels like hard times just keep coming then I realise it's often easier to remember and linger on the bad times cuz we expect the good times to be a normal part of life so when they're here we just kinda take em for granted and when they're gone, it's like life has done us a wrong and it's not suppossed to do that. But this is how we grow by learning how to take strength from these moments and savor the good. Nobody else is gonna be you or contribute the qualities you have the way u do, so don't let the horrible things overcome u cuz your life is valuable intrinsically and if u harness your potential theres no telling what you could do. Sorry to go all therapist on ya there haha just hate to see ppl feeling this cuz I know what it's like ~Ash "
Posted by Ashteroth on "This World..." by Phantasmagoria
- "Nice write but I have to say I read your page intro and you said though u can be negative you still have a heart for love, well that is beauty right there. Don't get me wrong, it doesn't ellevate our status to great person, just makes us normal and I believe our true selves normal state is beautiful. In the end you would feel more self loathing if u refused to open up and let love in or worse yet suffocate the love that u have within that needs to be expressed. Hard sometimes huh. Will get around to reading some more of your works ;) ~Ash"
Posted by Ashteroth on "Insecure" by Phantasmagoria
- "pretty cool phantasm, i got a great picture of this and im seeing this player with every swing of the bow a peice of her life is taken away until her ultimate demise. its very dark and deppressing in a way which i love and goes great with this peice. nice job!"
Posted by haunted on "The Violin" by Phantasmagoria
- "A beautiful poem here with a sorrowful tale. I love the imagery of the violin as your heart and how if used incorrectly it can be ruined. The rhyme and flow of the poem are excellent. Very well written."
Posted by Unknown on "The Violin" by Phantasmagoria
- "Orchestra based string instruments have a wonderful way of voicing our inner sorrows. The melodies can soothe the most tormented of minds. I myself play the cello and found this quite endearing.."
Posted by Unknown on "The Violin" by Phantasmagoria
- "Unfortunately, I can relate to this. Except I have brown eyes. I've always felt like the ugly duckling. I think alot of us don't truly see what the mirror reflects or even what others genuinely tell us."
Posted by Deathkitten on "Insecure" by Phantasmagoria
- "Wow.... that actually brought a bit of a tear to my eye... I don't think I will ever see beauty in myself, even though there are some that do. But your kind words made me feel a little better, thank you for such a meaningful comment."
Posted by Phantasmagoria on "Insecure" by Phantasmagoria
- "phantasm im going to tell you that you are very beautiful and i also want you to know that your brain is beautiful to! lol...your poetry always has me wanting more. and thats your words being also beautiful. dont beleive yourself if you think that what you see in the mirror is not pretty because i see a very sexy lady on the outside as well as on the inside and to me what else could you ask for. self esteem is really a peice of shit for lying to us and its not fair that at times when were down that we beleive it. your beautiful phantasm and i would hold you till you see what i see. thanks for sharing sweety."
Posted by haunted on "Insecure" by Phantasmagoria
- "It's only a matter of time...before...beautiful is something you feel....rather than something you see. "
Posted by Aleas on "Insecure" by Phantasmagoria
- "Wow looking at your picture not sure how you could think ur not pretty ur beautiful and your poems pretty good!!!"
Posted by Demon-666 on "Insecure" by Phantasmagoria
- "Well.... I dunno. Like I said, Im just really broken right now, and this is how I feel. I've been insecure my entire life, but I've become alot more recently. Thank you though, for commenting."
Posted by Phantasmagoria on "Insecure" by Phantasmagoria
- "Well, thanks :) I guess I'm just a really broken person and I dont see any sort of beauty in myself, nor do the people who have hurt me. "
Posted by Phantasmagoria on "Insecure" by Phantasmagoria
- "The use of rhyme works well here you paint your picture in very few words though an image is created very well written. "
Posted by Unknown on "Insecure" by Phantasmagoria
- "this is really amazing...actually has a lot of how i feel....and i mean ALOT....i found it very well written too....and also since i can relate i really loved it"
Posted by Unknown on "Insecure" by Phantasmagoria
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