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- "Thought and memory, and what they become of us, when we, like them are gone into the silence of only words. Perhaps a lullaby of contentment, or a litany of guttural grievances. Our gift to you. Cheers Proph! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "The Burden of Dreams and Disbelief." by TheProphetUntold
- "What a powerhouse of a piece. Your minimalist style always provides so much to ponder and pick at, my first and most pressing wondering is about those unseen wings... Do they carry or propel? Are they for function or frustration? And if they could fly, where would they take these thoughts? I am not a person that needs closure in life so this encompasses me. I love to have the freedom to wonder and never find out. You are still a palpable force with a pen. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "The Burden of Dreams and Disbelief." by TheProphetUntold
- "This made me think there was some force, some kid with a lighter, standing off to the side, a smile on his face, flicking the lighter over and over, appreciating their influence. So much possible to unpack in this, after several reads my mind keeps going somewhere new and I think it could connect infinite dots and never be able to answer that last line. Awesome man, much enjoyed."
Posted by Dilated View on "The Burden of Dreams and Disbelief." by TheProphetUntold
- "Through the ritual of summoning, as if recreating that which was caste before Time swallowed the world, we come to know Despair in her full array of grays; she offers no solace, and in cold pastoral, she leads us by your words to rest without peace. Wordsmith beckoning, this here. *fire* "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "The Wood and White." by TheProphetUntold
- "loved this entire piece, but this one bit stuck out to me the most .. "Deeds, joy and meaning, empty,
side by side we watch them die."
always love reading your stuff although its been a while xox
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Posted by Chelsey Elaine on "The Wood and White." by TheProphetUntold
- "I went to bookmark this but can't find the bookmark icon hidden anywhere. Nevertheless, this is 100% killer with a lovely lilting and soft wonderful tone. And that enjambment on, "No soft piano/
raindrops on my worn rooftop": Silent Dynamite."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Quiet, Just Quiet." by TheProphetUntold
- "The weave, the craft, the details and that ending. There’s a film to be made from this. Tim Burton to direct? Definitely Edward Scissorhands-era Tim Burton but not Alice In Wonderland-era Burton."
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Man in the Lake." by TheProphetUntold
- "Damn that's good answer & honestly after I posted that comment I got to thinking about that aspect of it. But some people have vastly infinite imaginations that derive from other solidified things or imagery. I know my mind is always reeling & I can get a million ideas of a word or small idea of someone else. So I totally get it, thank you responding as such."
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "The Wolf Shepherd." by TheProphetUntold
- "I don't lead people by the nose. To me poetry is saying more than is written, or deriving different images or meanings from what is actually written. I am more imagination than literal interpretation."
Posted by TheProphetUntold on "The Wolf Shepherd." by TheProphetUntold
- "Although beautiful, I'd like to see people's insight more within the authors note; peek inside your head or attempt let ya'share it with everyone. I feel anything you would say, a descriptor building up anticipation would exponentially help some of your pieces convey even more emotion. Although these are nice to let others interpret, I would like to have a starting point in your head to read along with. Keep up the good work brother."
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "The Wolf Shepherd." by TheProphetUntold
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