Comments by All Members
- "I love how natural the flow is. Each line blends into the next, without seeming forced. Great write."
Posted by Unknown on "Dead at last" by BlackRose13
- "Beautiful webs of lines you wrote. Dark and I can sense the pain. I'm glad you're no longer in an abusive relationship. ))0(("
Posted by Unknown on "Dead at last" by BlackRose13
- "This was definitely a cool premise with many fertile possibilities, very clever but the rhyming scheme kept changing and that was a bit unsettling. Thanks and cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Cereal Killer" by BlackRose13
- "I have felt this pain...
your poetry tears scabs off of old wounds to set them weeping anew.
good write."
Posted by Winter Born on "alone" by BlackRose13
- "I saw, probably the inverse of this once. At these rose gardens there was a very large cluster of white roses and one red one hiden inside them. This poem reminded me of that. It is also a very lovely write."
Posted by Unknown on "A white rose" by BlackRose13
- "Hun, I hear ya, I totally can see what you feel inside, love hurts...lots of people on here feel similar but I get this wierd feeling yours is the closest to situations of mine. Keep up the great work, let love come to you, you'll know..."
Posted by MidniteBlaze on "why believe?" by BlackRose13
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