Dead at last

By BlackRose13

Never thought you'd hit me there,
or twist my arm and pull my hair,
but now i know i was so wrong
believing in you for so long.

You'd pull me close and kiss my eyes,
i fell in love with all your lies, 
but now i see the truth in all,
though loving you sure took its toll.

I think back on what we were
and can't believe how i stayed there,
but now i leave you in the past
i did fight back, you're dead at last.

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Copyright 2014 BlackRose13
Published on Tuesday, May 13, 2014.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: some pain is beautiful, but not this kind. stay strong and dont stop writing

  • A former member wrote: I like the ending here :)

  • A former member wrote: I love how natural the flow is. Each line blends into the next, without seeming forced. Great write.

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful webs of lines you wrote. Dark and I can sense the pain. I'm glad you're no longer in an abusive relationship. ))0((

  • A former member wrote: I like the ending....

  • Dark Wing On Tuesday, May 13, 2014, Dark Wing (51)By person wrote:

    wow I like the flow of this write, good job

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