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Dead at last
By BlackRose13
Never thought you'd hit me there,
or twist my arm and pull my hair,
but now i know i was so wrong
believing in you for so long.
You'd pull me close and kiss my eyes,
i fell in love with all your lies,
but now i see the truth in all,
though loving you sure took its toll.
I think back on what we were
and can't believe how i stayed there,
but now i leave you in the past
i did fight back, you're dead at last.
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Copyright 2014 BlackRose13
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A former member wrote:
some pain is beautiful, but not this kind. stay strong and dont stop writing
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A former member wrote:
I like the ending here :)
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A former member wrote:
I love how natural the flow is. Each line blends into the next, without seeming forced. Great write.
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful webs of lines you wrote. Dark and I can sense the pain. I'm glad you're no longer in an abusive relationship. ))0((
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A former member wrote:
I like the ending....
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On Tuesday, May 13, 2014, Dark Wing
(51)
wrote:
wow I like the flow of this write, good job
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