why believe?

By BlackRose13

You´re born with such perfection
the world is really pink,
but as you grow you realize,
your world´s been stained with ink.

The day is not so bright,
the night aint as romantic,
you live by other´s rules
and nothing is fantastic.

We all live by the book,
but we're forgetting something
our final day of judgement:
based on  all our sins.

But men can´t go to hell
if in hell they are living,
and men can´t go to heven
if can´t even imagine it.
A sin without a judging,
a god withought  power,
if our place is the abism,
then why believeat all?

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Copyright 2005 BlackRose13
Published on Monday, May 9, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • MidniteBlaze On Monday, May 9, 2005, MidniteBlaze (23)By person wrote:

    Hun, I hear ya, I totally can see what you feel inside, love hurts...lots of people on here feel similar but I get this wierd feeling yours is the closest to situations of mine. Keep up the great work, let love come to you, you'll know...

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