what did you do

By BlackRose13

My cheeks are cold, my eyes are blury, what did you do?
I can`t breath, my legs are shaking, what did you do?
You looked at me but didn`t see me, what did you do?
THose deep blue eyes don`t want my staring, what did you do?
Those sweet soft lips repulse my kiss, what did you do?
My dreams are dark and full of pain, what did you do?
Today my dream was just too real,
today my cheeks were just too cold,
today my eyes were just too blury, 
today my legs just didn`t hold, what did you do?
Tomorrow those eyes I`ll keep on staring,
tomorrow those lips will feel my kiss,
tomorrow someone will ask about you,
but you won`t be there, what did you do?

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Copyright 2005 BlackRose13
Published on Tuesday, June 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • BlackRose13 On Tuesday, June 7, 2005, BlackRose13 (3)By person wrote:

    I didn`t know if to put it as poetry or not

  • A former member wrote: I would have enjoyed it more if you had put in line breaks, but either way, it was powerful, nice write.

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