Comments by All Members
- "Something deep and knowing trembles within me upon reading this..... this is poetry, indeed, a true and affecting read. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Penitential" by Carmina Gitana
- "Great imagery ..I was reminded of the romance novels my mom use to read with the woman an a elaborate gown bosom partially exposed..LOL and long haired muscular man embracing her on a pirate ship of some sort. But your story is
rather bittersweet. Nicely written."
Posted by River Lily on "The Siren's Lament" by Carmina Gitana
- "This is a great write. I love the rhyming and the little red riding hood references. Your style lulled me to a sense of feeling sorry for the wolf as if I was the one trying to be a friend to him .good write
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Posted by Unknown on "Afternoon of the Wolf" by Carmina Gitana
- "ah, this is excellent.. read like a dream, I could feel the bitter curve of my lips deepening with every line. You may not understand why people like this so much, but I feel that I do.. it's just so relatable. How many of us have been there, having this conversation and feel that angry burn on our fingers ? There was a line in this.. 'my hands moves then..' and I thought, I *hoped* for a second, that it was moving to punch him in the face. Perhaps this piece did that enough without you needing to.. "
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "i was entranced by the title and from then to the end i was just swept away in the beauty of this....i'm surprised i haven't read any of your work before....but be rest assured i will be back due to how this first one i read of yours affected me...simply superb....****-knight"
Posted by knightmirror on "Galaxy of Letters" by Carmina Gitana
- "I remember reading this one a long while back. I like it then, but I feel more connected to it today. I think I have grown a bit since then; in my understanding of a lot of things. Thanks... ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- ". . . maybe I am not supposed to say this, but I've never understood why people like this particular piece so much. But thank you for this, and your other kind comments :)"
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "...perfectly crafted, & maybe I'm just adding to this mountain of praise so that you'll never reach the bottom of the page..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "hehe, indeed. for upon those whom moonlight melts, they are the ones who hold a gleam within their eyes.... a sparkle of night-shine.... wise words in here, yessiree. thanks... threatening but all the more enticing, maybe."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Afternoon of the Wolf" by Carmina Gitana
- "this is outstanding. even monsters are pitied when they're ancient & seemingly harmless...'old habits rest, but never die', old lust remains, but satisfactions's hard to come by... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "Afternoon of the Wolf" by Carmina Gitana
- "Wow, metaphors within metaphors, marvelous. Stalactites and stalagmites can also join and create columns. Sensual and coming full circle at the ending, well done Carmina, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Pearl Grotto (v. 3)" by Carmina Gitana
- "The siren sounds quite sure of herself and must definitely know the hearts of men, great poem, pass out the ear plugs (HA)! Thanks Carmina"
Posted by dwells on "The Siren's Lament" by Carmina Gitana
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