Comments by All Members
- "Interesting title, it made me wanna read. I'm glad I did..the romance of cooking together, eating together, and such..nice work ^_^"
Posted by Elise on "Black Spaghetti" by Carmina Gitana
- "This I like... so many layers, so much intrigue... the detachment and displacement, flirting between empathy and sympathy... "
Posted by MercyRain on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "I have no idea how to critigue such an outstanding work. Except to say, make more make more!!! You have made my favorites list with this one.
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Posted by Chimauron on "Rhythms of the Sun" by Carmina Gitana
- "i'll read anything with " cigarette " in the title ... im glad i do .. it brought me to this piece ... so black and white scenery , with the cigarette tip glowing red , and redder ... excellent ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "Wonderful metaphor. I loved every bit of this, the imagery, and the fact that it is stocked full of emotion. As with the rest, I'll just agree...wonderfully portrayed."
Posted by Six-Out on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "This is a great write! I love the mood you convey and that cigarette keeps burning down and down like you must feel. Awesome! I'm coming back for more!"
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "Ah-ha! And another one for the first three stanzas. I am seriously considering at least having an alternate version of this. Quality over quantity and all :)"
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "Galaxy of Letters" by Carmina Gitana
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