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- ""but my cigarette
has reached
the end of its patience"
we're like our menthols, our unfiltered's, the packs of rolling tobacco. sometimes we have a filter that we're right at the end at or we don't have one at all.
beautiful poem.
"
Posted by nuclearentrails on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "I'm so embarrassingly late to this. I'm so pathetically out of bookmarks. I'm so ridiculously impressed. *bows* I think Tom Waits would do an awesome performance of this. Outstanding. Outstanding. Did I say 'outstanding'? Yeah? Repeat until dead. >:D"
Posted by purr_verse on "Hell's Waiting Room" by Carmina Gitana
- "Thank you :) The back story is the source for that stanza - "The Little Prince" by Antoine de Saint-Exupery. The rose is the closest thing to a female love object in the story (I think) - only it's loved by a little boy, the little prince :)"
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "Hell's Waiting Room" by Carmina Gitana
- "I like this VERY much! Reminiscent of everything I like about some of Bob Dylan's best lyrics. For some reason I especially loved the lines "And he's learned to live with the weight of the crown
But he still orders roses sent up to his room."...hints at a very cool back story. You are the Queen! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Hell's Waiting Room" by Carmina Gitana
- "i have had this faved now for what seems like forever ...and i have read it so, so many times. this is just brilliance..i love this piece so much."
Posted by Tania on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- "this must have been hiding from me; its a testament to strength and grace; to know this inevitable end and the humanity behind trying to avoid it, subconsciously, emotionally, physically blocking it out any way feasable. . .indeed well versed..nessa "
Posted by Unknown on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana
- ""When I am nothing more
than pulse and morning mist and vaguest recollections"....."Those are the fading particles
of my kiss" i couldn't stop my heart from collapsing. you took my breath away."
Posted by dying angel on "When You Are Sleeping" by Carmina Gitana
- "This simply defies description. It is a gift and a surprise to the world. On its behalf, I thank you. The whole concept… the language… the visuals… It is overwhelmingly good. "
Posted by Stranger on "When You Are Sleeping" by Carmina Gitana
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