Comments by All Members
- "This was short but it held a lot of truth I commend you"
Posted by LOKI on "Razor" by Roxxi
- "This was a good write. True life. That's where good Poems come from. Sometimes we all write from fantasy or inspired by a movie. I myself am guilty of that but I really liked this because it was real. Your pouring out your soul. Never forget that's a beautiful thing"
Posted by LOKI on "Gnarled" by Roxxi
- "A powerful write reminiscing of those memories that bore such a combination of pain and happiness... Like that salty sweet treat that has no right to taste that good...This is why we must never let those memories die though, they help us strive for something better, even if it may never come--The hope that it will keeps up from becoming numb... "
Posted by SolApathy on "Bandages" by Roxxi
- "This is an excellent write. This type of poetry is top shelf, a powerful message as well. "
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Bandages" by Roxxi
- "Sometimes it's so hard to stay away, good write I enjoyed this, it reminded me of how many times I've come back."
Posted by Purposelessness on "Bandages" by Roxxi
- "...Apologies are just a casual hello, they hold no meaning in their hollow utterance, But yet somehow I believe if I saw into your eyes and you whispered those words, there would be no lies... Never stop fighting your demons or they will win. In you I see a desire to never again, give in... Great write, a painfully true statement."
Posted by SolApathy on "Amends" by Roxxi
- "I was addicted for 30 years, and no one gave a dam thought of forgiveness to me, not even my family. Lost my only son to addiction, and he was forgiven with my heart., this is when i understood, forgive yourself first, for this is the mightiest step to change.....your write is truth....just be true to you for the rest of your days...13......"
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "Amends" by Roxxi
- "Only those that know that they have messed up due to their past demons deserve forgiveness. Sadly, not many people will forgive or some will but won't forget. It's a battle on many ends. Hopefully those souls do fully forgive soon. Great write."
Posted by Commander_Cadaver on "Amends" by Roxxi
- "wow, really powerful great emotion conveyed. This is so fucking true with "how can I make it up to you" best of luck with your life, live long and healthy friend. "
Posted by Lil Rorschach on "Amends" by Roxxi
- "Soulmates ! A rare love...well done, forever his girl... Super write !!!"
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "Scar" by Roxxi
- "We come from a dark abyss, we end in a dark abyss, and we call the luminous interval life. As soon as we are born the return begins, at once the setting forth and the coming back; we die in every moment"
Posted by Sorrowful Jester on "Scar" by Roxxi
- "I can only imagine the horrors behind that pipe. Brutal write and it needed to be. Well done."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Svengali" by Roxxi
- "Such a poetic use of Svengali... She speaks to you in sweet whispers of self destruction... "
Posted by SolApathy on "Svengali" by Roxxi
- "Wow, that's hard. It's good to feel some relief with words.
I like this because of the word flow and a particular feel of vocabulary which you brought to this one. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Gnarled" by Roxxi
- "That was really nice. I like the imagery and the longing I felt in this. Very nice work."
Posted by Phalanx on "Gnarled" by Roxxi
- "“On my mind, play God with my thoughts†that was such a beautiful line. Very warming and tender piece. "
Posted by IamZero on "Scar" by Roxxi
- "I've read all of your posted poetry on here, and this one is my favorite. You have a gift, girl. 10."
Posted by Tagen on "Hallelujah" by Roxxi
- "If only everyone had such a muse to cure them of their pain and hurt. I'm glad you have someone who makes you feel this way. This is a beautiful ode to your David💕"
Posted by BellaMorte on "David" by Roxxi
- "Very beautiful. You can feel the love for the soulmate. Great write."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "David" by Roxxi
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