Comments by All Members
- "I've asked many of these same questions. I like the way this was written...with the questions and then your answers. It makes it seems as though you were searching for better answers before you resigned to your own. My fav.. "Never to be remembered for whom I was, but for whom I could not be". "
Posted by MorganaRose on "If I Died Tonight" by DarkSoul
- "Your poem was laced with feelings i'm all to familiar with, and this really touched me deeply. It's the worst feeeling in the world, it really is. Best of luck to you"
Posted by Unknown on "If I Died Tonight" by DarkSoul
- "i love it. its how you feel wen you loved someone and you either caught cheating or they said they couldnt be with you anymore.i know this pain and i felt the same.this poem reminds me of a song called snuff by slipknot you should listen to it"
Posted by Unknown on "Apothocary" by DarkSoul
- "I agree...But what can you do. Like running underwater, you can never stay ahead in this world...and so, you can never really make a difference."
Posted by Unknown on "Faith" by DarkSoul
- "oh i loved the ending best. but it all was so lovely ;)"
Posted by Moonflower on "I" by DarkSoul
- "love recklessness hate chaois..though u cant have one without the other..awsomw write~Amanda"
Posted by Unknown on "Chimera" by DarkSoul
- "great use of analogies and a powerful statement... oh, to have a hammer engraved 'in case of emergency' i would smash each and every fraudulent mockery of myself until only i was left... amongst a crystal garden. Then perhaps I could see myself. "
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "How Like Glass We Are" by DarkSoul
- ""The cracks will always show" Yes....and so they do, to all who know us well. This is wonderous. You've left me stranded on the island known as thought. Thank you. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "How Like Glass We Are" by DarkSoul
- "superb reflection *no pun intended* steady and even with an intelligent thought provoking tone and clear crisp images... well done work"
Posted by NikesRain on "How Like Glass We Are" by DarkSoul
- "truly felt...many can relate to this, but a love without honesty is a lie and comfortable with all the lies is being blind. people who thrive on this do not deserve the emotions we pour for them 'alone.'"
Posted by blake on "Truth is Nothing but an Undiscovered Lie" by DarkSoul
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