Lascerate pt. 1

By DarkSoul

I do not want this anymore.
This sadness that I have,
Carried with me day to day.

Weighed down by my fatigue,
Sapped of strength and joy.
I feel I can't continue
With this life of mine.

But I know I must go on,
For there are those
That say they love me.
But I know that some
Among them who can lie
Like drawing breath.

They get so close to me
Only to slide that knife,
So razor sharp,
against my throat.
Lascerated and all bled out
Of passion, joy and hope.

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Copyright 2005 DarkSoul
Published on Monday, February 28, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • worm On Monday, July 17, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    I can feel the pain...

  • DarkSoul On Tuesday, March 1, 2005, DarkSoul (19)By person wrote:

    I love you guys way too much to do anything. You're what fuels me with the strength to go on. You are some of the best people I've ever met.~DarkSoul

  • Steven Jester On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, Steven Jester (7)By person wrote:

    Karl, don't you ever do this or I will fucking smack you! Remember, there are jids in our school that DO care about you, and c'mon, I can't loose my best friend now can I? The poem is nice, but no acting on it ok?

  • Forgotten Angel On Monday, February 28, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    oh jesus...*grabs a tissue and wipes her eyes* please dont do that...i need you for one..and me n crimson truly do love you..*gives you a huge bear hug* love you! -Kel

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