If I Died Tonight
By DarkSoul
If I died tonight,
Would anyone care?
Would anyone cry?
Would I be remembered
For whom I tried to be?
Or for whom I failed to be?
If I left tonight,
Would anyone go look for me?
Would anyone search?
Would I be forgotten
As the memories of me died away?
As my remembrance failed?
If I died tonight,
Very few would care
And fewer still would cry.
Never to be remembered for whom I was,
But for whom I could not be.
If I left tonight,
Few would look for me
And none would think to search.
I would be lost to the flow of time,
As memories of me died away.
“Who was he?” they say.
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Copyright 2005 DarkSoul
Published on Wednesday, January 19, 2005.
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On Monday, November 5, 2012, MorganaRose
(74) wrote:
I've asked many of these same questions. I like the way this was written...with the questions and then your answers. It makes it seems as though you were searching for better answers before you resigned to your own. My fav.. "Never to be remembered for whom I was, but for whom I could not be".
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A former member wrote:
Your poem was laced with feelings i'm all to familiar with, and this really touched me deeply. It's the worst feeeling in the world, it really is. Best of luck to you
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A former member wrote:
It makes you think... Nice job.
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A former member wrote:
"I would be lost to the flow of time,
As memories of me died away." - My favourite...
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On Thursday, December 29, 2005, Darkest_Addiction
(44) wrote:
this is a very well written poem and it does make u think. im sure alot of ppl would care if u died i know i would your a sweet guy :)
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A former member wrote:
i really like ur poem... yeah it gets you thinking sometimes... hahaha depressing but good...
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
show it..your a truly wonderful person! i guess i wrote 2 much before, eh? -Kel
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
thats a really good poem..and a lot of good ?s..i thought like that once..ran away 2 my grandparents garage (JiNx knows which one im talkin bout) but i was found bout an hr later..:) but..dont run away, people care about you even though they may not show
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On Wednesday, January 19, 2005, happilydepressed
(409) wrote:
very good reminds of a poem I wrote "Life and Death In Oblivion"