I Thought That We Would Last

By DarkSoul

I thought I was loved and that it would last
I was wrong, and so I'll pay the cost in blood
My blood, coursing in my veins, for you
Shall be spilt like rain from the heavens
And come pouring from my veins
For what good is this life of mine?
Especially when the one I love is torn
Between me and a lover held secret
But am I what I see my enemy as?
Another threat to take away the love of his life?
May be I am.
But I should think not.
But I should hope not.
But I can't tell for the life me.
And that, my love, is the cost
And if that is the cost for loving you
Then tell me, my dear,
When and where I shall pay?

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Copyright 2005 DarkSoul
Published on Thursday, September 8, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • The Crimson Queen On Tuesday, October 30, 2012, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    The past is so dark, I wonder what would have been if things had happened differently or would everything have always ended up this way..

  • A former member wrote: truly captivating. love it from the first line to the last. -mars

  • A former member wrote: I've been there and (hopefully) Im past it. Brilliant work.

  • coly On Tuesday, November 15, 2005, coly (54)By person wrote:

    you make me cry its like reliving the last year of my life but you let me know im not alone nice job

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