Comments by All Members
- "..the madness of thoughts.. a rush of every sentiment, every emotion.. in a sweeping of swirling tide.. it's almost relief.. the last line.. an end to it all.. for now. ..well-felt."
Posted by Unknown on "The Screaming In My Head" by GothicBlack
- "I know this is cliche - but I really know how you feel... I have been there so many times. Depressed when everythings finally "right". We should talk more, I miss you :). "
Posted by Kali Ma on "The Screaming In My Head" by GothicBlack
- "WOW! BRAVO! u really do make me mentally orgasm thru ur poetry u stimulate my psyche u r da Goth manz dream U R A Queen *P kisses your forehead in slow motion*-PERSEVERANCE-"
Posted by Unknown on "Raw Emotions" by GothicBlack
- "I am incredibly jealous of your way with words, and completely in awe of this piece. It was amazing from beginning to end, I didn't want to stop reading, and I didn't want it to end>Raven"
Posted by Ravenblade on "My Master Piece Of Lies" by GothicBlack
- "wow, this poem flows so well. i love the style of it, and I can definitely relate to what you say in here. a very beautiful, though sad, poem."
Posted by Kali Ma on "Raw Emotions" by GothicBlack
- "This is sensational, "a prayer...cryptic skies": wow! The imagery is so clearly expressed and yet so deeply moving and tortured, the rhyme and smooth blend of words is stunning. Beautiful!"
Posted by Unknown on "My Master Piece Of Lies" by GothicBlack
- "You have taken my punctured heart (yes, the one you punctured with needled words) in your artisticly molded hands and thrown the blazing thing of wax as far as you can. Beautiful. *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "My Master Piece Of Lies" by GothicBlack
- "Goodness...I just...wow...there truly are no words that I could even attempt to utter that would explain in the detail you deserve just how greatly this hit me...the best I can do is this:"
Posted by Unknown on "My Master Piece Of Lies" by GothicBlack
- "Also, you list several clues as to what you were before you "changed." It makes me suspect that you know exactly what happend, and so I wonder why you ask, at the end. If you don't know, tell us more from these clips, and let us guess."
Posted by Liz on "I Was Once Beautiful" by GothicBlack
- "I really liked this poem, the repetions and descriptions make it strong. The last six stanzas started to be redundant, though. I don't think that repetition is as good as repeating the one line. "
Posted by Liz on "I Was Once Beautiful" by GothicBlack
- "as opposed to those who read it and just follow the rest of the flock -=smirk=- i'm not saying this is poorly written besides if you read the whole bloody argument you might see how this started."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Farewell to God" by GothicBlack
- "don't tell me how to interpret it, if you post something here, expect other people to see a different angle...close minded my ass."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Farewell to God" by GothicBlack
- "And if I said at this point that I got it and this was a beautiful portrayal of sorrow, I think it would be lost in the dungeons of comments at this unheard prayer's knees...you wind metaphor with more depth than most..."
Posted by Unknown on "Farewell to God" by GothicBlack
- "This poem is beautiful. Your melancholy tone captures every word of this piece. Since no one else was going to comment on your poem, I thought I should. Also, know I'm always here with a shoulder.~T~"
Posted by Mistress Shadow on "Farewell to God" by GothicBlack
- "this was sad to read. i hope things get better... as for the ppl (person) below: you need to relax a little and realize that poetry is not literal... ~ Asheai"
Posted by Kali Ma on "Farewell to God" by GothicBlack
- "aside from picking this thing to death, i think it is a wonderful write. very beautiful, opening yourself, being vulnerable. i like it, plain and simple."
Posted by MESUN on "Farewell to God" by GothicBlack
- "i am under my own "category", i do not fit into any one religion. I speak of Angels, only because i like the idea of them. I think Six understood me best of all, as he always does. Thyank you all for your input though (i think. lol). ~gothic~"
Posted by GothicBlack on "Farewell to God" by GothicBlack
- "Dear, please seem literate before you argue. Note the 'maybe' in my comments? You're the one that assumed it was Christianity. But she cleared it up, why not let it go?"
Posted by Saint Sentient on "Farewell to God" by GothicBlack
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