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"A startling portrayal of something that in many small ways (though much larger for some) can make us who we are JD. We cope and move on, or hope to, eventually. Cheers my friend - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"You are all necessary. And you are all beautiful. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"Tragic and intense. Talk about fringing balance between it all. Great write. Sending good vibes your way. ~ Ash"
Posted by AmethystAsh on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"Sad but intense. I've been studying case studies about DID for school. Best of luck with everything."
Posted by Cassette on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"The human mind will never stop fascinating me, very intense text. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"This is such a sad story to read. Tragic. At the same time fascinating to hear about and understand a little more about this disorder. I have a deep and personal interest in any and all psychiatric disorders. I have depersonalization and derealization disorder."
Posted by Cantara on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"I can't really express how much I enjoyed this. This reminds me of someone and I wish it didn't. You have a really interesting way of telling a story. Very well written."
Posted by Drea on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave

"What a riveting and deep poem of utter consequence, and the steps we take to contain the darkness we cannot contain... "
Posted by SolApathy on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"Wow. All I can really say is that this poem gave me chills. Since I can't really do this justice, I'll simply say well done. Rebs:)."
Posted by Unknown on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave

"We, as human beings, can only take so much before giving an unrepentant offender a taste of their own medicine. Then they usually want to cry foul. I've always enjoyed poems that cleverly rhyme, it adds a bit of a sing-song feel. You always do great work. Rebs:)."
Posted by Unknown on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave

"This makes me think of the story of Colleen Stan. She was kidnapped when she was trying to get to a friend's house, and was held captive as a sex slave for seven years. Her abductor had her living in a box when she wasn't being used by him. This is galvanizing, and it really illustrates just how the mind works in a dire situation like this. Amazing job, dearie. Rebs:)."
Posted by Unknown on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"WOW...Beautifully written, very profound! Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"Each line pulls you in further. Very good. Very relatable"
Posted by Unknown on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"Amazing! I don't have anything deep or effectual I just think this is scathing and brilliant. Nailed to the spot. "
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave

"The flow... The content... The beauty in the chaos. Fantastic write. "
Posted by Mute Serenade on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"this piece was brilliant. good job to you. as drea said, i also have a friend who has multiple personas. this work reminded me of split, too. i'm glad i read it. "
Posted by Star on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"This. This took the air out of me. I have a friend that has multiple personalities. I've dealt with him for 17 years. This was eerily similar to a few situations. Damn good job. "
Posted by Drea on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"Depends on which one of us you ask. LOL"
Posted by Just Dave on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"it is pretty amazing that you can write down such horror lived so clearly."
Posted by bobbery on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave

"true or fiction, its a great write and familliar"
Posted by bobbery on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"Omg..... brilliant! ðŸ’šðŸ’šðŸ’šðŸ’šðŸ’š"
Posted by Willow Wept on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"A really fascinating poem. I like it! "
Posted by Arwen on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"very descriptive! the whys and wherefores of a shattered mind is a interesting subject, indeed... well written and interesting to say the least! ~worm~"
Posted by worm on "The Multiple Minds of a Fractured Persona " by Just Dave

"Sounding like a real "Fatal Attraction" bunny burner Dave. Some women just grab hold and won't let go - until the novelty wears-off. We takes our chances my friend - cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Wrong Turn" by Just Dave

"This is beautifully written, good job. "
Posted by FangsInsanity on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave

"Truly... someone needs to make an illustration for this piece... I'm thinking... can you imagine, just for a moment what Silverstein would pair with this? Finally? The epic, brutal hideous cartoon that we all know lives inside of him? I'd email him but I ain't got that kind of sway. "
Posted by Maladroit on "The Monster Inside" by Just Dave

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