Comments by All Members
- "Coming down off MDMA is brutal, though the feeling while on it is pretty well captured here. Shrooms will always be my favorite- that come down ends with ice cream. And doesn't leave me grinding my jaw sore. "
Posted by Unknown on "Colours Seem Textile" by SirEnders
- "Thank you, it's easy writing about one's own life. Just have to find the word flow and articulations. Again, thank you for reading. Hope you like the rest of my poems as well."
Posted by SirEnders on "Happy Birthday To Me" by SirEnders
- "Very deep..... I have read a lot of your poems.. Very heartfelt. You have an amazing talent. Your words make me feel like I'm there living in with you. Keep it up amazing. "
Posted by AnaMia92 on "Happy Birthday To Me" by SirEnders
- "Thank you. I do appreciate everyone here. They welcome me, wish me luck, and help me on my poetry. Again thank you for reading mate, have a great day. "
Posted by SirEnders on "Tainted Moonlight" by SirEnders
- "Ive got skeletons in my closet and monsters under my bed, Aliens in the attic talk to the demons in my head. "
Posted by Unknown on "Strongly Fragile" by SirEnders
- "Brings to mind the context of my writing when I came here 6 years ago, dredging up the kind of latent anguish that no one would dare wish on another. I often cite that poetry is how I make sense of the discord around me...I can tell it's much the same, for you. DarkPoetry is as much a shelter as a place of growth, stay awhile and hone your verse, further."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Tainted Moonlight" by SirEnders
- "reads like you had fun writing this, cause i enjoyed reading. this piece bleeds a colorful freeness, and the rhyme scheme's fresh and catchy. Thanks for sharing :)"
Posted by Void Vortex on "Through the Looking Glass" by SirEnders
- "Nice write, SirEnders. With a pro flow like that, and with such captive imagery, I really can't find it in me to take this piece literally. Much enjoyed! :)"
Posted by Void Vortex on "Happy Birthday To Me" by SirEnders
- "I like the tone of it and I feel it is a very sincere poem. You told a story and poured out emotions in just a few lines. "I wish this was true, but I'll be with you soon
The love is wrenching, I'll die under the same moon", was my favorite line. Nice!"
Posted by Unknown on "She Is My Dream" by SirEnders
- ""Prince and Princess of darkness and death" is my favorite line but I love everything from that point down. The rest of the poem was very enjoyable and easily flowed together. "
Posted by Unknown on "She Is My Dream" by SirEnders
- "Thank you, I truly do appreciate you taking the time to read it over. If you have any suggestions to my writings, I'd love to hear what you have to suggest."
Posted by SirEnders on "As I Kneel To Death" by SirEnders
- "I do apologize for bringing up past memories. I also thank you and appreciate you reading it. How you do you learn? Through experiences, regardless of the good or bad outcome, you learned your lesson. Thus enabling you to have a more inside look on the situation. Everything has a reason and specific outcome. I wish you better days. Again, thank you for reading."
Posted by SirEnders on "Into Death's Arms" by SirEnders
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