Comments by All Members
- "Very good piece of writing! equating yourself to the river was masterful... and the imagery was perfect! ~worm~"
Posted by worm on "My River" by Lab Rat
- "This is tumultuous, and the struggle just adds to it. There`s a verse in there that really resonates with me but more in a dream`state than reality. Black ink at it`s finest!"
Posted by Devil lyn on "Beholden Discontent" by Lab Rat
- "there's a lot going on here! ultimately I sense the classic struggle of good vs evil... Well Done! ~worm~ "
Posted by worm on "Beholden Discontent" by Lab Rat
- "I, also, used to wallow in the lost brightness of youth... that's when I found a new purpose when I started volunteering at a homeless shelter... ~worm~ "
Posted by worm on "Upon a Silence" by Lab Rat
- "same old song? certainly! the definition of insanity is to keep doing the same things and expecting a different outcome... change happens... it just has to be fought for... Be Well! ~worm~"
Posted by worm on "the same old song" by Lab Rat
- "I think we`ve all faced some form of struggle that seems endless; like a uroboro or a flight of stairs going backwards ... such an observation/reflection. *good to read you, again;)* "
Posted by Devil lyn on "the same old song" by Lab Rat
- "I once wrote ,"You can't go back by adding another verse to the same old song ." And my voices are whispering to me as I look into the bottom of the empty glass ,"Get milk.""
Posted by midnights voice on "the same old song" by Lab Rat
- "I never know what to say. It's hard, i know. I'm just glad you're writing. You have no idea how much I've been wanting to read something new from you. "
Posted by Drea on "the same old song" by Lab Rat
- "Oh you'll find these flaws quite often, I'm a very lazy writer when it comes down to it. Most of my posts I spit out in the matter of minutes, and don't bother to brush them up or do any polishing outside a quick run through for spelling errors. There are a few here in my list that I have, usually (at least to me) one could pick out the differences. I can't argue with the critique its pretty spot on, thanks ;)"
Posted by Lab Rat on "Living Obituary Lives" by Lab Rat
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