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- "That last stanza was absolutely mind blowing so poetic, its dim yet so beautiful great work there absolutely loved it"
Posted by Unknown on "Pitiful " by 101darkraven
- "I enjoyed this. "To you it's a tradgey
To me it's a celebration." You painted a dark but cheeky and joyful message. Nice write"
Posted by Unknown on "And i was gone" by 101darkraven
- ""'m surrounded by wickedness..
but i refuse to be swallowed by it.
My options are fading away.
I will no longer serve the pitiful." - yup, you can't swallow what they are trying to feed you...that is the only defense sometimes. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Pitiful " by 101darkraven
- "My stomach is churning. You poor child, you. As much as I hate admitting this, I've been a victim. The soul slowly numbs itself through each transition in your life because you were stolen from yourself. .shakes head in disapproval. -Write on"
Posted by soul_versing on " The Broken Daughter" by 101darkraven
- "confinement to a self-made prison is common and I can appreciate that moment when enough-is-enough. Not wallowing in the darkness, and then choosing the optimistic approach... invigorating. Truly a great piece that you have written here. Hello there poet, and welcome to the valley. -Write on "
Posted by soul_versing on "Gasping Voice " by 101darkraven
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