And i was gone
By 101darkraven
i didn't really need your pity nor your
resentment .
I stand right beside you unnoticed looking at your
sobbing face.
Your sweet tears of sobbing .
Don't cry..there's no need.
Because i've wanted this
to happen.
You should be happy i want
you to smile.
I can finally breathe.
I've been waiting for this moment to happen
for a longtime.
I laugh at your saddness.
I laugh at your pain.
I laugh at how you cry over
a shell.
Your tears won't bring me back.
Stop before my heart tears out of my
chest and starts laughing.
To you it's sadness.
To me it's happiness.
To you it's a tradgey
To me it's a celebration.
You hand me life.
No! i don't want your life.
But i want your happiness.
Now i watch this empty shell
vanquish.
Deeper and deeper the hole
goes.
Time goes by.
Now watch this shell decay.
And before you know it.....
I was gone.
Comments on "And i was gone"
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A former member wrote:
I enjoyed this. "To you it's a tradgey
To me it's a celebration." You painted a dark but cheeky and joyful message. Nice write
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On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, Livingdeadgirl
(57) wrote:
love the imagery and emotion put into this, well written and thoughtful. i like it, nice job
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On Wednesday, November 25, 2015, 101darkraven
(56) wrote:
thank you :)
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On Friday, November 20, 2015, 101darkraven
(56) wrote:
thanx man :)
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A former member wrote:
Richly dark and haunting. Loved it!